Mr_MiniMize Resume

[Mr_MiniMize]

Hey guys, I just wanted to put my resume out there in hopes to receive any feedback... Thank you!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d1R-W2ph_-Yp0Ovp8DfA4emQyhZaLnIp2RMMyXOFqwc/edit?usp=sharing

 

[Yohhan]

Hey guys, I just wanted to put my resume out there in hopes to receive any feedback... Thank you!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d1R-W2ph_-Yp0Ovp8DfA4emQyhZaLnIp2RMMyXOFqwc/edit?usp=sharing

Vouch for this guy. I have work with this guy for months now. He is doing great!

 

[Mr_MiniMize]

Vouch for this guy. I have work with this guy for months now. He is doing great!

Thank you!

 

[Mr_MiniMize]

Any feedback would help...

 

[Annie S.]

Heya! This is in the wrong section, which might be why you're not getting many comments! A few things I noticed just skimming over it all:

• "Java" should be capitalized at all times, as it's a proper noun
• Extra space between "experience" and "creating", (Information section, first paragraph)
• "cannot" instead of "can not" (Information section, last sentence)
• While probably fine for a Minecraft resume, it's usually bad practice in professional fields to mention that you failed at something without including a tidbit about how you learned from the mistakes
• Listing "being a native speaker and US-born citizen" as your hobbies "outside of [...] Minecraft" is a little awkward (I get that you're trying to bridge that into being outgoing and loving to talk to others, but!)
• "preferred" spelled wrong & "Discord" not capitalized as a proper noun (Contact/Information section, last line)

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