Music Idea

[TK]

This is an idea I had, decided to make it into a ~30 minute sketch, no mixing or anything. Wanted to see if the idea was good enough to continue

 

[Ren]

Sounds amazing! Would definitely be good for intros and trailers!

 

[yo]

I would personally recommend to make the baseline something other than a standard piano. This is especially noticeable when you have such a powerful chorus which creates a sort of distaste if someone were to dig a bit deeper in the song.
Also the instrument you are using for your melody of the song (sounds like some kind of play on a choir but I'm really not sure) could probably be replaced with better fitting instrument or sample. I do have to say it gives a nice compliment in the chorus though.
I can't tell how experienced you are, but for a beginner song it sounds pretty good; keep it up!

 

[TK]

I would personally recommend to make the baseline something other than a standard piano. This is especially noticeable when you have such a powerful chorus which creates a sort of distaste if someone were to dig a bit deeper in the song.
Also the instrument you are using for your melody of the song (sounds like some kind of play on a choir but I'm really not sure) could probably be replaced with better fitting instrument or sample. I do have to say it gives a nice compliment in the chorus though.
I can't tell how experienced you are, but for a beginner song it sounds pretty good; keep it up!

thank you for telling me that my 30 minute sketch of a song idea is beginner level and not answering the direct question, but I understand you're trying to help. The majority of my time was spent playing around in serum for the drop, so everything else was a preset and basic patterns

 

[yo]

My answer to your question was to keep it up. Also my bad on saying beginner song, I meant it more as beginning of the song. And yes my intention was just to put some ideas out there and not in a view of judging. Sorry about that.