My Best server Trailer!

[Ilay A]

I tryharded on that one, want some feedback

Charged 25$ for that one, should I increase prices?

 

[AdamEdits]

Slides are trash u should decrease and charge $9 I gave you feedback to remove the 2nd clip where it goes forward then backward and u didn't seem to care so stop asking for feedback if u don't take this shit to consideration

You shouldn't be appraising this if you're not a cinematographer as you don't know the time and tedious work it takes to create one. This isn't worth $9... just sounds like something you picked out of your head

i don't mind you giving the constructive criticism, though

 

[AdamEdits]

1St off I make trailers 2nd off His trailers are worth $9 idk what in ur right mind u think danny charged $20 and made 2x better quallity lmfao

- Danny quit so your point is invalid, I'm sure he saw editing more of a passion than anything if he charged $20 a trailer. Last time I checked his prices started at $50-$75.

- I've seen a few of your trailers. In my opinion, and I'm sure many would agree... the quality of yours aren't any better than his, so you're basically saying that you yourself should be charging $9. If not, you're a hypocrite

 

[moon10k]

I disagree.

Plenty of known trailer makers or at least trailer makers with a big potential have quit due to how big some people egos are, horrible market pay or simple got bored and found something else more entertaining to do. I myself quit cause i have studies and other jobs to take care of that make me even more racks than what this market is capable of provide me with.. I still offer it sometimes just to make a quick buck since it's fun to do it sometimes.

Now... Sunide only has been doing it for like a month or two and personally his trailers and way to use certain stuff are x10 more cleaner than mine, in certain areas they are incredibly flawed but personally i dont see llay any close to Sunide capability of understanding general editting. Sunide's trailers at the very start were completely garbage but he actually became better from what he use to provide on a really fast speed.

Now. This is something interesting since it's quite different from your usual trailers, however, seems something that everyone is capable of doing with just a little bit of knowledge on editing.

• 3D Camera Tracking for texting.
• A big amount of Shake amplitude and frequency. Personally i dislike that. It's just odd.
• Simple cinematics with increased distance blur on Sildurs Extreme Vibrant Shaders plus time remapping to sync it.
• Personally, I wouldn't have used that font as it just seems to stand out a lot and doesnt blend in with the background.

This is not in any shape or form a diss; in fact looks way more better than the poop that Sunide sometimes makes and looks incredibly clean. Good job :tup:

. I'm just on a personally really good mood after watching Bird Box. Really good movie; I recommend to watch on netflix fairly interesting plot.

rate my trailers I wanna be roasted too pls

kthxbye

 

[Vortixin]

Looks awesome, you should add custom text i think that will make it much better.

 

[Ilay A]

I disagree.

Plenty of known trailer makers or at least trailer makers with a big potential have quit due to how big some people egos are, horrible market pay or simple got bored and found something else more entertaining to do. I myself quit cause i have studies and other jobs to take care of that make me even more racks than what this market is capable of provide me with.. I still offer it sometimes just to make a quick buck since it's fun to do it sometimes.

Now... Sunide only has been doing it for like a month or two and personally his trailers and way to use certain stuff are x10 more cleaner than mine, in certain areas they are incredibly flawed but personally i dont see llay any close to Sunide capability of understanding general editting. Sunide's trailers at the very start were completely garbage but he actually became better from what he use to provide on a really fast speed.

Now. This is something interesting since it's quite different from your usual trailers, however, seems something that everyone is capable of doing with just a little bit of knowledge on editing.

• 3D Camera Tracking for texting.
• A big amount of Shake amplitude and frequency. Personally i dislike that. It's just odd.
• Simple cinematics with increased distance blur on Sildurs Extreme Vibrant Shaders plus time remapping to sync it.
• Personally, I wouldn't have used that font as it just seems to stand out a lot and doesnt blend in with the background.

This is not in any shape or form a diss; in fact looks way more better than the poop that Sunide sometimes makes and looks incredibly clean. Good job :tup:

. I'm just on a personally really good mood after watching Bird Box. Really good movie; I recommend to watch on netflix fairly interesting plot.

while I agree u are way better than me but ive been working on new stuff

I dare you to challenge me, humor me

rate my trailers I wanna be roasted too pls

kthxbye

Absolutely thank you all for criticizing my trailer

 

[Whip Me Grandma]

I tryharded on that one, want some feedback

Charged 25$ for that one, should I increase prices?

The shake is very odd, I don't like it too much tbh. The time remapping is very poorly done and is not smooth which is good because you have a lot of potential. Same with the title screens, they're just not eye catching and good. I wouldn't use these type of songs tbh either. I personally believe $25 is fair for this because of the cinematics but not because of the editing. I also believe that you have a lot of potential to improve then charge more.

 

[Ilay A]

The shake is very odd, I don't like it too much tbh. The time remapping is very poorly done and is not smooth which is good because you have a lot of potential. Same with the title screens, they're just not eye catching and good. I wouldn't use these type of songs tbh either. I personally believe $25 is fair for this because of the cinematics but not because of the editing. I also believe that you have a lot of potential to improve then charge more.

Hmm, is the "poor remapping" because of the back and forth movements ?

 

[Whip Me Grandma]

Hmm, is the "poor remapping" because of the back and forth movements ?

Well all of it doesn't look smooth, especially the back and fourth movements which just completely ruin the flow

 

[Ilay A]

Well all of it doesn't look smooth, especially the back and fourth movements which just completely ruin the flow

Hmm, will look into it, like, for me it looks fairly smooth, is it the connection between the different shots?

 

[Whip Me Grandma]

Hmm, will look into it, like, for me it looks fairly smooth, is it the connection between the different shots?

It doesn't look smooth to me, the back and fourth parts anyways because it looks forceful and it doesn't seem like it fits in with the rest of the time remapping

 

[Ilay A]

It's the least smooth. Even the transitions from text to builds Is barely even good they look forced. So does the remapping. Shouldnt have even went back and forth I have a feeling that you added keyframes to go back and forth. that's a bad habit if you actually did.

Yup, tried experimenting and doing stuff differently, and I learned from this mistake, thanks