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not bad for a first build, just keep on building, its not as easy as it sounds/ looks to build good. Just keep at it!

Stairs are very good for details
 

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not bad for a first build, just keep on building, its not as easy as it sounds/ looks to build good. Just keep at it!

Stairs are very good for details
Thank you bud.
 
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Good first go at it, definitely better than mine ;-; For tips though you should add more 'meaningful' detail. By this I mean none repeated "slab spam", add shape to your build by using blocks/stairs/slabs to just make it look nicer, an example of this would be
apocalyptisrender68612900.jpg

...yes, I know it's very elaborate for an example but I just wanted to show you how the use of shapes and patterns can just make your build that more incredible and eye-catching. Another thing you could add is depth, what this implies is the layers of blocks your build shows. Instead of having a flat wall like this:
hfxQQ.png

You could add depth and minor detailing to make it pop out a little
2013-08-23_22.02.15.png

This is a little more basic.

If you REALLY want to become a good builder then I suggest watching YouTube tutorials (vadact, alpha, gazamo etc), or joining public build servers where you can practise building and then get feedback from the best out there. I'd suggest vadact, sunfury, or any other large build teams server. I hope this helped xD (I usually go a little over the top)..
 

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Good first go at it, definitely better than mine ;-; For tips though you should add more 'meaningful' detail. By this I mean none repeated "slab spam", add shape to your build by using blocks/stairs/slabs to just make it look nicer, an example of this would be
apocalyptisrender68612900.jpg

...yes, I know it's very elaborate for an example but I just wanted to show you how the use of shapes and patterns can just make your build that more incredible and eye-catching. Another thing you could add is depth, what this implies is the layers of blocks your build shows. Instead of having a flat wall like this:
hfxQQ.png

You could add depth and minor detailing to make it pop out a little
2013-08-23_22.02.15.png

This is a little more basic.

If you REALLY want to become a good builder then I suggest watching YouTube tutorials (vadact, alpha, gazamo etc), or joining public build servers where you can practise building and then get feedback from the best out there. I'd suggest vadact, sunfury, or any other large build teams server. I hope this helped xD (I usually go a little over the top)..
No no dude, you helped alot. :D thanks for the tips. I will certainly put them to use.[DOUBLEPOST=1423915560,1423915525][/DOUBLEPOST]
Good first go at it, definitely better than mine ;-; For tips though you should add more 'meaningful' detail. By this I mean none repeated "slab spam", add shape to your build by using blocks/stairs/slabs to just make it look nicer, an example of this would be
apocalyptisrender68612900.jpg

...yes, I know it's very elaborate for an example but I just wanted to show you how the use of shapes and patterns can just make your build that more incredible and eye-catching. Another thing you could add is depth, what this implies is the layers of blocks your build shows. Instead of having a flat wall like this:
hfxQQ.png

You could add depth and minor detailing to make it pop out a little
2013-08-23_22.02.15.png

This is a little more basic.

If you REALLY want to become a good builder then I suggest watching YouTube tutorials (vadact, alpha, gazamo etc), or joining public build servers where you can practise building and then get feedback from the best out there. I'd suggest vadact, sunfury, or any other large build teams server. I hope this helped xD (I usually go a little over the top)..
Maybe can you make an official thread for this?
 
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Nice, for a first build dude! I have built before but not very good. My hub is nearlly done and will be selling for like $15 lel

EDIT: Also if it's going to be a repetitive build, and you are new. Make a quarter of build and copy + paste to rotate!
 

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Nice, for a first build dude! I have built before but not very good. My hub is nearlly done and will be selling for like $15 lel

EDIT: Also if it's going to be a repetitive build, and you are new. Make a quarter of build and copy + paste to rotate!
Okay thanks for tip :D I appreciate all of it people!
 
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I guess I could make a tutorial...but I'm sure there are plenty out there!
 

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Don't repeat the wall so much. I suggest having 2-3 different walls and making a pattern with them. If you don't understand what I mean just PM me.
 
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