My first Ripoff Trailer [Pretty good]

[Ilay A]

I tried to ripoff Woodzy, this is a fanmade trailer since I'm not allowed to charge for ripoffing someone else, I edited this for 2 hours, give me some criticism and opinions

 

[Ilay A]

And, yes I made the CC myself lol, my first time doing that

 

[Marchi]

I tried to ripoff Woodzy, this is a fanmade trailer since I'm not allowed to charge for ripoffing someone else, I edited this for 2 hours, give me some criticism and opinions

Make me one ?

 

[Ilay A]

Make me one ?

Opening a shop later , but I guess it means that I did good xd

 

[Marchi]

Opening a shop later , but I guess it means that I did good xd

I mean a vouch copy, i would vouch for you if you make me one and yes this one is very good in my opinion

 

[Ilay A]

Looking for more criticism and feedback, I know it's not easy to give feedback in this, but I appreciate anything

 

[Yandere]

I like it

 

[Mwex]

Nice trailer
You don’t show that much of the server, but great work

 

[Ilay A]

Nice trailer
You don’t show that much of the server, but great work

It's a teaser for an update says it in the title

 

[Whip Me Grandma]

I wouldn't say it's good but it's okay.

 

[Ilay A]

I wouldn't say it's good but it's okay.

Anything you can say about the edit? CC? Idea? Angles? Message? Text?

 

[XMario]

Anything you can say about the edit? CC? Idea? Angles? Message? Text?

Text is too static and tempo is too slow paced.

 

[Ilay A]

Text is too static and tempo is too slow paced.

Thank you, I realize that the text is kind of poor and I should've animated a background so it's nicer to look at

 

[Drub.]

I have some feedback, even though I really like the trailer I have some feedback.

- Try to fade the letters on their place. They look so blocky, you know? So try to fade the velocity at the end. So it looks smooth.
- The background whenever there's some text I'd say try to just use some footage of the server and display that in the background with a blur.
- The font that was used, is not really good looking. I know it has to be a theme of the server but try to make it like a futuristic font.

Overall, very nice trailer. I like it and would definitely buy one from you. (If I'd have some money )

 

[Ilay A]

Try to fade the letters on their place. They look so blocky, you know? So try to fade the velocity at the end. So it looks smooth

Good idea should learn how to do that

The background whenever there's some text I'd say try to just use some footage of the server and display that in the background with a blur.

That actually ruins the dramatic effect I'm trying to give, it fits only flow trailers when you don't want to break the constant movement

The font that was used, is not really good looking. I know it has to be a theme of the server but try to make it like a futuristic font.

I'm desperate for fonts, if you got some hit me up

(If I'd have some money )

people tend to think I sell them for 200$, not sure where they got this idea, I sell them for 20 bucks lol

 

[Whip Me Grandma]

Anything you can say about the edit? CC? Idea? Angles? Message? Text?

Just everything is mediocre

 

[Ilay A]

Just everything is mediocre

I get you, it's not easy to teach or give feedback, but it's good to know I at least made something decent for the first time

 

[Whip Me Grandma]

I get you, it's not easy to teach or give feedback, but it's good to know I at least made something decent for the first time

BTW I didn't like the font but everything else was decent enough, just didn't stand out

 

[Ilay A]

BTW I didn't like the font but everything else was decent enough, just didn't stand out

Yeah, the text part was done very poorly, already mentioned that couple of posts above