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Hey guys, just wanting to get some feedback on my latest track All I Want. Lyrics are not my own.


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ok this is actually much better than i expected, good shit
 

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is you....... sounds nice gj
 

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not exactly my music genre but I listed to this kind of music a while ago, it seems like a pretty good single, keep it going no matter what
 

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Hey! Nice to see another music producer around here.

Everything sounds really well mixed!

To get into technical nitty nitty gritty, and I mean, super small things that are really opinionated, all I'm really noticing is that:
I feel like the vocals are mixed really well, but I feel maybe there could be some sort of saturation, or richness, so to speak; I think that's just me though.

I feel like the synth section is wonderful, but I feel like there are times where ADSR could be more "separated" sounding at around 1 minute, to give it more of a jumpy feeling. This is all my perspective of course.

The bit before the drop, at 1 min, I feel like that gap could be used with some sort of echo, reverse vocal, FX sort of thing, just to keep up the energy, but I mean, silence isn't bad either, just my personal cup of tea, then again, you might have played around with echo/delay already in that section which I totally get trying something and then not liking it after.

At 1:55 or 1:56, when the singer says "feel" , I heard a really annoying resonant frequency that I would have eq'd differently.

I feel like the compression could have been toned down a little bit, but given it's an EDM song, it's totally understandable. OTT is king lol. I'm a violist who was in an orchestra, so I personally appreciate dynamics.

Lastly, I don't think I hear any sidechain, (some in the beginning I presume and by the drop it's sort of hard to hear) and the kick is sort of drowned out by everything else, when it comes in; I think giving the kick more presence would give this track the last little bit it needs.

Hearing it now again, I want to add that it sounds like I can hear the kick pretty distinctly until everything comes in, then it sort of gets really hard to hear, so maybe a volume automation of some sort could assist with that.

Yeah, when the drop comes in - kick is definitely present, but second half of drop, I just don't feel the impact as much.

Lastly, I would have ended the track a little differently, but I mean, music is entirely subjective.

Again, these are all my opinions as a fellow music producer; been producing for 6 years! I definitely think this track is catchy and well produced nonetheless, and it's super cool to see other people sharing music here!

All in all, great work on this track! It's an excellent track; I just felt that as a producer I'd love to share some feedback that you might find valuable, because I know I get the same feeling as a producer where I show my music to other people and I hear "it's cool, it's great sounding, etc." but not "low pass here, high pass there" technical stuff. I really appreciate that as a producer myself.

Great work!

All the best,
Day
 
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Hey! Nice to see another music producer around here.

Everything sounds really well mixed!

To get into technical nitty nitty gritty, and I mean, super small things that are really opinionated, all I'm really noticing is that:
I feel like the vocals are mixed really well, but I feel maybe there could be some sort of saturation, or richness, so to speak; I think that's just me though.

I feel like the synth section is wonderful, but I feel like there are times where ADSR could be more "separated" sounding at around 1 minute, to give it more of a jumpy feeling. This is all my perspective of course.

The bit before the drop, at 1 min, I feel like that gap could be used with some sort of echo, reverse vocal, FX sort of thing, just to keep up the energy, but I mean, silence isn't bad either, just my personal cup of tea, then again, you might have played around with echo/delay already in that section which I totally get trying something and then not liking it after.

At 1:55 or 1:56, when the singer says "feel" , I heard a really annoying resonant frequency that I would have eq'd differently.

I feel like the compression could have been toned down a little bit, but given it's an EDM song, it's totally understandable. OTT is king lol. I'm a violist who was in an orchestra, so I personally appreciate dynamics.

Lastly, I don't think I hear any sidechain, (some in the beginning I presume and by the drop it's sort of hard to hear) and the kick is sort of drowned out by everything else, when it comes in; I think giving the kick more presence would give this track the last little bit it needs.

Hearing it now again, I want to add that it sounds like I can hear the kick pretty distinctly until everything comes in, then it sort of gets really hard to hear, so maybe a volume automation of some sort could assist with that.

Yeah, when the drop comes in - kick is definitely present, but second half of drop, I just don't feel the impact as much.

Lastly, I would have ended the track a little differently, but I mean, music is entirely subjective.

Again, these are all my opinions as a fellow music producer; been producing for 6 years! I definitely think this track is catchy and well produced nonetheless, and it's super cool to see other people sharing music here!

All in all, great work on this track! It's an excellent track; I just felt that as a producer I'd love to share some feedback that you might find valuable, because I know I get the same feeling as a producer where I show my music to other people and I hear "it's cool, it's great sounding, etc." but not "low pass here, high pass there" technical stuff. I really appreciate that as a producer myself.

Great work!

All the best,
Day
Thank you very much Mr Producer Man! <3
This is very useful!
 
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