My Resumé

[Splitback]

Hey everyone!
I'm a fellow Minecraft player and recently made a resumé.
I've only really worked as a lower-ranked staff member, but you've got to start somewhere.

I need a little bit of criticism on it; I don't care if it's negative, positive, toxic, I just need feedback.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10nNgdQn-VlhyNJ3edAYoCMbMFbb8ZQhtt1zD5lnawTQ/edit?usp=sharing

As a sidenote: I'm not currently looking for any positions as a staff member, but feel free to contact me anyways.

Thanks so much guys!

 

[wolfgirlfan]

Enabling comments (or "edits with approval") is a tool that can assist you with your grammar, or suggestions other people can put in your document - without editing the original (you can approve if you want their additions, or simply deny them).

 

[Ted]

I'm so glad that there is hope in the community for young teenagers that are becoming responsible.
Making a Resume at an early age is amazing. I can barely even remember all the servers I staffed on, nor the dates too!

 

[Splitback]

Enabling comments (or "edits with approval") is a tool that can assist you with your grammar, or suggestions other people can put in your document - without editing the original (you can approve if you want their additions, or simply deny them).

Will do! Thanks for the advice. [DOUBLEPOST=1511710875][/DOUBLEPOST]Here's the new link with comments enabled:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10nNgdQn-VlhyNJ3edAYoCMbMFbb8ZQhtt1zD5lnawTQ

 

[Abstention]

Vouch for Splitback. Very professional, would recommend for anything.

 

[Ken]

Based on the first looks of your resumè, it looks bland and doesn't really show your personality. Plus in some areas, it lacks detail; I understand this is not a generic styled resumè, but most of your document would have been in a cover letter. Sorry if I'm coming across rude, but I just said I felt about your resumè.

 

[Splitback]

Based on the first looks of your resumè, it looks bland and doesn't really show your personality. Plus in some areas, it lacks detail; I understand this is not a generic styled resumè, but most of your document would have been in a cover letter. Sorry if I'm coming across rude, but I just said I felt about your resumè.

Thank you for your criticism! I appreciate it just as much or more than compliments. It helps me know what to improve.

What do you think would be good to add? Or, do you have a good example for me?