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I'm here because I want to post some of my stories I've written. They're organized into different sections, so uh yeah. Please leave criticism and stuff below, and if you liked it. Rating outta 10 would also be nice :>

Gonna say this before-hand, none of my stories are for underage kids, or people who can't take shit seriously. They include scences of death, violence, blood, and anything really. Hf reading.

I'm a published writer :>

Depressing stuff
Be warned this is like emotional stuff, and contains a lot of mentions to personal events, and what I've personally been feeling, please DO NOT read this if you know that it'll affect you in any shape or form. You have been warned! Each story will have a reason for writing it (The depressing section)

Do you ever feel so depressed you just act hyper and happy? Then you start seeing shit everywhere? That’s what’s happening to me right now. You have it when you respond instantly to somebody and you get a response like after you message them again? Ouch, that happens to me all the time. You ever hate it when you feel like you’re unloved yet just an hour ago you were told you were? Yep, I have! All this shit going on in your head it’s impossible to get it to stop it’s so hard you try to force yourself but you can’t. It’s like why you do this, you don’t know what I’m feeling. It’s a joke honestly with you. I hate life so much it can kill you from the inside. You know what’s worse? Love. Love just kills you from the inside, it’s worse than depression. It starts digging your heart from the inside out, slowly killing it. It digs you from the inside and just takes over you. You try to protect yourself from it, from the last time, but somebody manages to break that protection. It’s like a wall, never to be broken but somebody can find a way to just sneak in quietly and then destroy it from the forces of the inside. So many nice things but then bam it gets crushed by one small thing, and your heart is in bits. Then you put a wall up again and it goes in circles, a never-ending circle. You could put up a million defenses but somebody just manages to get in, then you start becoming different and feeling like shit when stuff doesn’t happen that you want. Ugh
You ever want something to simply just end, you want to stop something without hurting people around you. Life would be one but there are so many more things, but you just don’t want to hurt anybody. You want to take a break from something or somebody? You can’t cause it’ll hurt them. It’s annoying, it’s like being in a cave, stuck, with no release because then millions of people die.

You ever so close to killing yourself, but it all just goes down the drain? I have. Can’t exactly say I liked it but I’m happy I’m alive in a way. You hate it when you’re there, like death is your fate, and you’re in a sense ready to die but scared, scared out of your mind, because you don’t want to leave your family. What if you live? What’ll happen then? What if your family kills themselves because of you? There’s so many what if’s mixed into suicide. I doubt a suicidal person can say to me “I’m not scared to die!”, most if not all suicidal people and victims, are scared of death. Anyways, back on track, you ever been so close to dying then bam, it happens. It just all goes black and you feel like you’re dead, until next thing you know you’re slowly opening your eyes just barely, and you can hear all these noises and all these shouts from everywhere. Wait, there’s a scream as well, some tears too. You can’t open your eyes fully but you hear all this, then a few words stick out from the crowd, “... suicide... lived... possibly fatal...”, but you can’t get the rest. Then you close your eyes again and it goes black for a few seconds, and goes to as if it was in a dream. You can see some things from your childhood, then bam you hear all these voices again, this time you’re more conscious though, you open your eyes fully this time, and all you see is doctors swarmed around you. You try to lift your head but it’s as if you’re chained down, you can’t move anything, not a single muscle, you try to, but you’re being held down. Suddenly somebody starts speaking to you, “what’s your name son”, you stare at them blankly as if you don’t know what to say... you think about it for a few minutes until giving a final answer, but then when you say it they look at you puzzled and confused, then they look at the other doctor, nod, and come back to you, they ask you questions like what happened but you can’t remember. Then you slowly start falling asleep. Day by day go past but for you it feels like seconds. You wake up all of a sudden and see family everywhere, there’s family to your left right in front of you all around you. All just waiting there patiently. Then you remember, what happened....

Suicide. What exactly is it, why do people do it. Well, the most obvious answer to all this would be, they want to die, right? Well, wrong. Suicide is something that happens because of many reasons, and it isn't always the most obvious answer. Most people might think it's depression which lead them to it. That's where you're also wrong mate. You also think that suicidal people want to die? You're also wrong.
As somebody who's attempted suicide more then enough time's, I know exactly what goes through your mind. You don't actually want to die from suicide, you want to live. But, it's the only way to escape all these "forces", all this hate you're getting from people, everything that you get, it's so hard to escape and get rid of. Most people who want to die, are scared of dying, funnily enough. They're scared of what happens next, because they don't want to die, but as I said before, it's the only way they can escape from all this pain and hatred that they receive. Suicide isn't as simple as "I'm going to kill myself", there's so much more in it and so much more behind it

Being manipulated, one of the worst things that can ever happen to you. Especially, while being in a relationship, it's even worse. Do you just hate it, when you're being manipulated into doing something. There's so many different things that can happen when you're being manipulated. You can get manipulated into doing something, or dating somebody, or stealing from somebody, so many things. I hate the dating one the most, being told that somebody is going to do something if you leave them, because then it's like you need to stay with them because you don't want to see them hurt, even though you don't actually like them...

"Creepypastas"
This contains mentions of NSFW stuff, illegal content, and so forth.
I’m writing this to inform people to never ever visit the deep web or dark web whatever one. My experience of it is horrific and unless you know what you’re doing on it, don’t go on it. I’ve contacted the police about it and they found nothing, the house was empty with no bloodstains, nothing was left in it and they couldn’t track the site down used... This was the last time of going on here...

It started off with my friend showing me some site which he would buy all sorts of drugs from for the cheapest prices around, the one and only Silk Road. He told me this was an amazing site to visit and I should go on it myself to buy some stuff.

He told me how to set it all up, use TOR, protected mode and so forth. He told me how to get onto the site and what to do to buy the best drugs, and even sent me some money via some strange online money called Bitcoin, he told me to set up a bank or wallet or whatever he called it and send me some bitcoins which then I would use to buy all the good stuff.

After all this I went home instantly and went on my Laptop ignoring everything else and throwing everything on the ground. I downloaded all these weird programs to set this up and got on it. My friend told me some information that I should’ve listened to while he was telling me about this. He told me never to go onto chat rooms and if I do don’t ever speak out, as these people don’t mess around. I ignored him and thought I was going to be a pro at this, he made it look so simple and easy. I went onto Silk Road and other sites and after a few weeks of browsing this hidden internet I automatically thought I was a pro and knew everything about it. I thought of myself as some cool ass hacker who knows all ‘bout this shit.

I disabled protected mode and this was one of my biggest mistakes ever.. the first site few sites weren’t too bad, just child porn, humans, assassinations and just casual stuff. I decided to go onto a chat room since that was too boring for me. And I went to a chat room called “TUDeathGore”, I thought nothing of it. Before entering the site a warning popped up saying that this was only for the cold-hearted and do not visit it if you don’t know what you’re doing, me being me thinking I’m so pro I ignored it and went on the site.

It asked me to set a username so I set it as “yugi 123”, I thought myself of some cool dude going on this. I saw a lot of people chatting with random names, and then some screen. It said press me to start, so I pressed it. What I saw next horrified me...

It was a bunch of cameras of what looked like the same house, it was on at 3 people, what looked like a small girl, a mum, and dad. Then appeared a fourth camera. It looked like it was in a basement or attic, this person had a mask on and started speaking. The voice was deep and didn’t seem as his real voice, he then said, “Bye bye to these people” and laughed. I thought nothing much of it, and chat was exploding with laughter and grim stuff. That camera suddenly disabled and you could see where the Dad was behind him stood that person, he said something that you couldn’t hear to the Dad than with an axe hit it off his head while the Dad was turning around. His head split in half and you could see his face falling off with all the blood coming out... It was disgusting.. he then took the arm, sliced off each finger and put it into a bag, he laughed right into the camera and left this scene like nothing happened.

That camera turned off suddenly, and it was the Mum next... he stood behind her while she was doing the dishes, and he showed the camera behind him 3 tools, one was a lighter but one that could burn through the skin in a matter of seconds. The next was a knife, not any knife but a long sharp knife, and finally a fork. From the Dad, I was already wanting to call the cops but I needed to see what happens next. I was tempted to put in chat you sick fucks how could you do this but I thought not to.. I was told not to, but I was waiting to see what would happen.

First he grabbed the lighter and turned it on, he put it on her neck and it burned right through her, her screams were so loud you could hear them like it was some ear rape.. he then got the knife while she was looking into the camera helplessly screaming and crying, while blood was pouring out of her and he sliced her neck.. her head fell off and started rolling and she fell to the ground, or at least what was left of her. He then grabbed the fork and stabbed her tit over and over again with it and at the end sliced it, and put it into a plastic bag.

The child was terrified you could see if she was crying and hiding in the corner of her room, her face looked so poor yet so helpless, it was so sad. This masked man went up to the girl's room taking off his mask in the process. He took off his bloody white clothes in the process and made it seem like he was a cop... I was starting to type in chat when I saw the live video turn to the girl. He walked in pretending as a cop then when she started walking with her, he grabbed her mouth and duct taped it. He then smashed her head off the wall as it was nothing and took her.. the live stream was over, and it said: “Be back in 5 minutes”.

The chat was cheering him on and was so happy and excited, it seemed as if they won the lottery they were that excited.. I was freaking out this was sick and how people could do this killed me. I was about to comment “YOU SICK FUCKS HOW ARE YOU LAUGHING AT THIS YOU’RE FUCKED IN THE HEAD YOU STUPID FUCKS”. Suddenly, I got a text through my phone, it said “Send that message and watch what’ll happen”, it had no name no number, nothing. It seemed as the number never existed... I didn’t send the text but instead tried to close the site. But it wouldn’t let me, my cursor wasn’t moving... Then, the screen went black and text started writing, it said: “Hello Tim (surname), do not exit this site and watch the rest or else you can see what’ll happen to you and it won’t be very pleasant”. I carried on watching and it came back to the girl.. this time the girl was tied up to a chair with glass all around her, there was some sort of animals there but I couldn’t exactly tell what one.

There was a voice that was being spoken, it was asking questions. “How old are you” 14, “Whats your name” Lucy, and so forth it kept on going and going. Until a man walked in, he put duct tape over this poor girls mouth... He got himself some tools like his back pocket, he first got himself an electric shaver. What he did with it was horrific and I’ll never forget it...

He got the girls arms, snapping off whatever was attached to it causing it to start bleeding, which made him laugh and start licking off the blood, he seemed as he was enjoying himself.. the sight was grim.. but what happened afterward was even worse... The girl was crying her eyes out and he started shouting stop crying, when she didn’t, he got the shaver and started shaving her arm skin off, he was laughing at it and the chat was going crazy over it.. it was sick, just fucking sick... I couldn’t stand the sight which I was seeing.

She was crying her eyes out and screaming even though it was very blunt.. she was bleeding so much, he took some duct tape and tied her arm up right above the cut.. what he was going to do next will be the worst thing I would’ve ever seen...

He grabbed a big tub of water, and a cable which is connected to a switch.. he lightly lowered it into the water only the slightest bit and put her face in there for a few seconds. He shouted, “YOU ENJOYING THAT?!”.

The girl was screaming. He then got his shaver out and he grabbed her leg, he started drowning her again, and while she was drawing he started to shave her leg, bit by bit as if she was some ham being cut, slowly cutting it down, watching it bleed, while she's screaming in pain in the water and the water's starting to reach the cable. He started to show the cut off skin to the camera, and the chat was exploding with all these comments... it said: "OMG THAT'S SO AMAZING DO IT AGAIN" "COME ON MAN YOU CAN DO THIS" and more and more, it was the most horrific scene ever...

I decided to finally post something in the chatbox because I couldn't take this anymore. I posted "I'm calling the police on you sick fucks", the second I sent send, everyone froze, even the person who was live streaming it froze and looked into the camera for a second... It was as if they all knew me and they could see through my camera and see me, then people one by one started replying to me, they said "You don't know who you're talking to", "Watch your back", "We're coming for you". Suddenly, I was getting text messages, "Get off the site", "You're dead mate", "You dare call the police watch your back", it came on coming and coming, it wouldn't stop...

Then, out of nowhere, I was landed with a black screen with big white text, the text said "Banned by ADMIN". I thought thank fuck and I turned off the site and shut down my computer. I couldn't dare ever go onto this site again. I was about to go to sleep when I got another text, but this time it was from my friend, he messaged me saying "wtf dude what did you fucking do", I thought that it's impossible that he knew about the thing, and replied with a simple, "Nothing?", he then started explaining what I did, and when I sent that comment I was going to pay the price, he started blocking me of everything and his final message was "Do not ever message me again."

I decided to go to sleep now, after hours and hours of being in this weird chat room and seeing all this happen.. I said to myself that I'll call the police tomorrow morning. At around 2 at night, I woke up, I heard some noises being made downstairs, I was home alone, and this was really creepy. I started to slowly make my way down the stairs. I saw the light flickering, and I started to get my phone out, I had no weapon except for my fist. I put 9 on the dial while going down, I put the other 9 down, and then BANG, next thing I know, I wake up in an ambulance.

I start to question and try to remember what happened, I start thinking in my head, then I ask "What happened?", but I don't think anybody can hear me over all the shouting. Everyone was shouting in the ambulance, and there was so much noise being made from the ambulance driving down, I didn't understand what was going on, I tried to look up but I couldn't, it was as if I was being forced down to lay down, I tried to also move my leg but I couldn't feel it, I started to ask questions like "what's wrong what happened please tell me", the people were not saying anything... they just stared at me as if I was going to die, and then continued.

They put a mask on me, and I couldn't speak because of it, and I passed out afterward, next thing I know, I'm awake in an I think it was a hospital bed, it was the worst experience ever. I had my whole arm plastered and my leg was plastered as well, I didn't know what's going on, it was so scary, suddenly detectives started coming inside and interviewing me, they started saying "Did you go to any site you weren't supposed to be on?" and interviewed me as if they knew everything, of course, I told them everything I saw and what happened.

2 weeks later, I'm let out of the hospital, and have witness protection to prevent me from being tracked by these people.. It's the scariest thing that's ever happened to me, but it wasn't over. A day or two after I set up my PC, I start getting these random things happen, random files appear with nothing in them, I get random websites open, until one day a website opens and it says "Welcome back, Tim. How was your stay in the Hospital?", I was about to smash the laptop when I got a text "You do that, and you'll be back in there, this time you'll be dead though". I didn't smash it and I put it down.

The screen went black, and a video suddenly appeared.. It was my old house, and it was the video of what happened to me.. I was horrified to see what happened to me. I was first knocked out using a baseball bat, I was hit right in my neck the position knocked me out right away. Then, I saw him get a knife and start cutting half my arm, and I was helpless, I couldn't do anything to help me as I was knocked out... He got some of the skin from the arm and put it into a plastic bag, as he did with his 2 other victims... He then with the same knife cut some of my leg going downwards... I was horrified to see this happen, and now I know what had happened to me.

The site suddenly closed, and my PC shut down, my phone shut down, and my electricity went off, I grabbed my gun from under the table I had just in case, but the power all came back on, everything was fine.. I just got let out of witness protection after a few years, and nothing had happened ever since, the police, couldn't find anything to be able to help my case, the website seemed as it never existed and the texts were the same, there weren't even any texts on the phone when the police got it..


Random ass stories that don't have a specific section but wrote them cause I was bored asf

Basically, contains everything.

Love/Depressing
I hate love. I hate being in love. I hate everything related to love. You put up all these defences for love, you try your best to defend yourself from love, you don't want to fall in love, but in the end it just gets into you. There's that small tiny gap which you can't see which you haven't protected yet cause of how small it is, but that one person you meet, finds that gap, and gets in. Once they get in, you try to build more defences but it's like they're slowly eating your heart away. You can't put more defences up something that doesn't exist right? They're slowly taking over your heart, like they're eating it and replacing it with a different one. Love's so argh, you try to not fall in love, but in the end, you just do it. You can't really stop yourself from falling in love, and it's so like unexplainable. There's so many different things to love, and you can't stop them from happening. Then you get fucked over, and you put up more walls, but the same process happens over and over again. I hate love.

Cheating. Well we all know what cheating is, right? If you don't well uh, google's here for you (act dishonestly or unfairly in order to gain an advantage). So, I'm going to talk about relationship cheating because well, yeah, half this thread is about this shit so why not. Back on the point, cheating is something we all would've experienced in our life. (In 2017, a study shows in over 1/3 of marriages, one or both partners admit to cheating). So, cheating is a big thing. Now, cheating may be big but what happens to the person after they find out they've been cheated on? There's many things that can happen. After cheating, you experience all these different emotions and feelings, "Was it me?", "Wasn't I good enough?", "Why did it happen?" and so forth, all of these different questions happen that can't be answered because well, you've most likely left your partner, blocked them done everything. Who would want to be with somebody who cheats anyhow. Cheating can lead to so many things happening in your life, like isolating people, not dating, not doing anything in your life. It can head to a wide range of stuff.
 
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09/03/18: Added suicide story.
11/03/18: Added a "Love/Depressing section".
  • Added Manipulation Story
  • Added What is suicide
  • Added Love story
  • Added Cheating
 
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Deleted User 48892 may you please explain your funny reaction? Is there anything funny about it?
 
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Start making furry fan fictions
Can you explain your funny on my thread please, and I'm not sure if that's supposed to be a joke or not. I write more or so depressing stuff or some short stories. I'm working on a serious book, so.
 
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Wow. The vent really hit close to home for me, I can relate so much to the thing you said about love.

I didn't read the creepypasta as I tend to get scared easily but I hope you get happy(or are happy) now <3
 

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Wow. The vent really hit close to home for me, I can relate so much to the thing you said about love.
Hope you get better soon then bro. If you ever need to talk, hmu in PM's or on discord, Emil#0296, I always put other people's issue's in front of mine so :>

I didn't read the creepypasta as I tend to get scared easily but I hope you get happy(or are happy) now 3
Haha, honestly, I get scared easily and so forth, but eh, I still like writing it even though I shit myself while doing so. And yeah, I try.
 
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I guess that since it's a creepy pasta it Isn't your real story, (let me know if it actually is and sorry for my ignorance) but honestly something in deep web happened to me but not gonna talk about it, 10/10 on that story
Yeah, the story isn't mine, and that mustn't have been the best then ^-^
 
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That creepypasta made me cringe, good stuff mate :tup:
Haha, my first one so :> Slowly gonna get better, but thanks ;d
 
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I swear I’ve read that exact creepypasta before..

Good story, but imo your sentence structure is quite awkward and doesn’t flow nicely. Made it hard to read.

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I swear I’ve read that exact creepypasta before..
Make on reddit you have, I posted it there before. You possibly could've seen it on there.
imo your sentence structure is quite awkward and doesn’t flow nicely. Made it hard to read.
I see, thanks! I'll keep that in mind =)
 
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