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"The Girls Strike Back" Sequel to "David and the Cinderella Story"
By: Jamal (AKA Locatious)

Once upon a time, in a galaxy, far far away...

(Music stuff)

Star Wars
The Girls Strike Back

The Empire (girls) haven't given up, and are still
on the hunt for David, where their love and passion
for him has turned into a bloodthirsty taste of
revenge.

The girls have sent on of their spies to befriend
David and his girlfriend (name is still unknown)
and to find out what David sees in her.
Layla's tracker had been broken,
giving the girl's an unknown idea whether
she is alive or not, and without her reporting back
they may never know where David is at.

Now that their spy Layla has befriended David,
the story will take place from here on...
"Layla! That fucking hurt," yelled David, as she punched him for taking her coffee.
"Well, then don't take my coffee. Never ever touch a girls coffee, us white gals love Starbucks," said Layla.

David had been somewhat suspicious of her for the longest time, she was really nice, don't get him wrong, but maybe a little too nice. Aly was back at home (that's his girlfriends name) taking a nap and taking care of the baby (yes, they also had a baby). The day was beautiful, maybe seventy or eighty degrees outside, but the breeze was what kept the two friends protected from the humidity. Life was going great, which was also somewhat odd for Aly and David should have been in hiding, worrying all the time.

"Come on David, let's go to this alley! There is some really cool graffiti I want to show you," said Layla.

This was odd, somewhere secluded. I need to be on my guard, though David.

Once they had arrived, Layla slowly slid a knife into her hand, coated in acid, the only substance that could impetrate David's sexy six pack. Then she lunged out at him like a ninja through the night, screaming her battle cry
ferociously through the mid afternoon's quiet. David was prepared for this moment, and he ripped open his buttoned up shirt, displaying his shiny and hard-steel like abs. Then David saw the knife coated in the acid, and quickly pulled out a dagger of his own. He then lunged at her in mid air also, while letting off his beautiful yet horrifying roar of battle.

At the same moment, both of there daggers had transformed into curved like swords, and they clang together loudly as they connected with one another. Layla took her sword and tried driving it into David's stomach, but David quickly pulled back and deflected the attack, and took the moment to grab her by the hand, and twist her hand into a tight and uncomfortable position causing her to drop the sword. Then, David twisted her arm behind her back, and held the sword to her throat.

He asked with a disgusted tone, "Who are you working for? I want to know now!"

She didn't respond, and grimaced when he pushed the sword closer to her throat, pushing her skin slightly inward.

"I assume that the others don't know where you are, since I am not sensing any thermal trackers. I noticed yesterday though that your ear seemed to have a little mole behind it, which I assumed was a tracker immediately. You girls need to learn how to disguise those things better." With saying this, he jabbed the sword into her throat heroically, and left the alleyway.

Once David had returned home, he and his wife Aly had yet another romantic night and he promised to never leave her side.

THE END

LOLOLOL This was a waste of time, but eh, who cares xD

WOW. k.
King boredom has arrived Kappa
 

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"The Girls Strike Back" Sequel to "David and the Cinderella Story"
By: Jamal (AKA Locatious)

Once upon a time, in a galaxy, far far away...

(Music stuff)

Star Wars
The Girls Strike Back

The Empire (girls) haven't given up, and are still
on the hunt for David, where their love and passion
for him has turned into a bloodthirsty taste of
revenge.

The girls have sent on of their spies to befriend
David and his girlfriend (name is still unknown)
and to find out what David sees in her.
Layla's tracker had been broken,
giving the girl's an unknown idea whether
she is alive or not, and without her reporting back
they may never know where David is at.

Now that their spy Layla has befriended David,
the story will take place from here on...
"Layla! That fucking hurt," yelled David, as she punched him for taking her coffee.
"Well, then don't take my coffee. Never ever touch a girls coffee, us white gals love Starbucks," said Layla.

David had been somewhat suspicious of her for the longest time, she was really nice, don't get him wrong, but maybe a little too nice. Aly was back at home (that's his girlfriends name) taking a nap and taking care of the baby (yes, they also had a baby). The day was beautiful, maybe seventy or eighty degrees outside, but the breeze was what kept the two friends protected from the humidity. Life was going great, which was also somewhat odd for Aly and David should have been in hiding, worrying all the time.

"Come on David, let's go to this alley! There is some really cool graffiti I want to show you," said Layla.

This was odd, somewhere secluded. I need to be on my guard, though David.

Once they had arrived, Layla slowly slid a knife into her hand, coated in acid, the only substance that could impetrate David's sexy six pack. Then she lunged out at him like a ninja through the night, screaming her battle cry
ferociously through the mid afternoon's quiet. David was prepared for this moment, and he ripped open his buttoned up shirt, displaying his shiny and hard-steel like abs. Then David saw the knife coated in the acid, and quickly pulled out a dagger of his own. He then lunged at her in mid air also, while letting off his beautiful yet horrifying roar of battle.

At the same moment, both of there daggers had transformed into curved like swords, and they clang together loudly as they connected with one another. Layla took her sword and tried driving it into David's stomach, but David quickly pulled back and deflected the attack, and took the moment to grab her by the hand, and twist her hand into a tight and uncomfortable position causing her to drop the sword. Then, David twisted her arm behind her back, and held the sword to her throat.

He asked with a disgusted tone, "Who are you working for? I want to know now!"

She didn't respond, and grimaced when he pushed the sword closer to her throat, pushing her skin slightly inward.

"I assume that the others don't know where you are, since I am not sensing any thermal trackers. I noticed yesterday though that your ear seemed to have a little mole behind it, which I assumed was a tracker immediately. You girls need to learn how to disguise those things better." With saying this, he jabbed the sword into her throat heroically, and left the alleyway.

Once David had returned home, he and his wife Aly had yet another romantic night and he promised to never leave her side.

THE END

LOLOLOL This was a waste of time, but eh, who cares xD

[DOUBLEPOST=1460994155][/DOUBLEPOST]I hope you guys enjoy my story <3
Okay Okay, That is pretty sexy. How about "The Girls Awaken"?
 

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Okay Okay, That is pretty sexy. How about "The Girls Awaken"?

I was just thinking about that, since I have nothing to do, I might do that. I just need to get an idea of what it should be about...
 

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xD I think it might be that the Girl's have found your wife and you son, and stolen them. Now it is up to you to save them. This will be a little "Star Wars" and "Taken" you gonna be like Liam Neeson up in here! xD
 

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xD I think it might be that the Girl's have found your wife and you son, and stolen them. Now it is up to you to save them. This will be a little "Star Wars" and "Taken" you gonna be like Liam Neeson up in here! xD
Sure. xD
 

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"The Girls Awaken"
By: Jamal (AKA Locatious)

Star Wars/Taken
The Girls Awaken

After finding out Layla's secret,
David is left to not trust anyone except
his wife and child.

After returning home one day from the store, he
finds out that his kid and wife have been kidnapped
by the Girls, who have awakened and reappeared.

David travel's to there base, "The Sexy Star" to find his family,
and save them. The story will take place here, and
wish luck to David!
David muttered to himself, "Motherfucking crazy ass whores taking my family, I'll teach them whose boss. Stupid crazy bitches."

After disarming two soldiers guarding the entrance to The Sexy Star, he snuck into the main frame room. He brought his little dog with him, which he had taught to use his cuteness to help him stay alive. The dog's name was "ChuBekfast."

Scamming over the camera monitors, he saw the room which his family was being locked in, which the one and only devil, "Darth Aubrey." While David used his sexy abs as a weapon, she used her (I think you know what it is, it's located in the same area xD).
Unbuttoning his shirt and revealing his abs, he walked through the hallways blinding girltroopers with his shiny abs. Once he reached the cell, he pulled back his muscled arm and punched the door, taking the door off it's hinges and smacking into Darth Aubrey's back pinning her to the floor.

Darth Aubrey then used her breast enlarger to push the door off of her, and then took out her curved sword, as did David also. He quickly untied his family and told them to wait in the hallway. As his family left, David flew off of the ground and charged Darth Aubrey.

"You don't deserver to live!" He yelled in his battle cry, and as he flew past her, she took out her sword and cut his knee.

HOLY MOTHER OF HELL THAT HURT David thought to himself. Dragging his knee behind him, he took out his ninja stars and flung them at Aubrey, which didn't impetrate her hard-steel skin.

David now understood that his sexiness was a true gift and curse, that his life was going to end because of it. In a heroic move, he dropped his sword and lunged at Aubrey with his chest out pointing towards her, and when they connected to eachother, the room exploded in a vast explosion of color!

Darth Aubrey lie on the floor, slowly disappearing into a misty force which will one day take up another body. David lifted himself up, breathing raggedly and very hoarsely. He then ran up to his wife and kissed her passionately, and took his kid's hand into his, and grabbed ChuBekfast. They went home and lived happily ever after.

As David left though, he didn't turn around to look at Aubrey's disappearing body. Darth Aubrey's body was starting to reappear, and she stuck her hand out through the rubble, and tightened her hand into a fist.

"Next time, you will be mine David..."

THE END
This was the weirdest story yet, I didn't know whether I should make Darth Aubrey have steel breasts, but I decided to go with it. This was very odd, I hope you guys like it, and get ready, Darth Aubrey is ready to strike back any moment....[DOUBLEPOST=1460995579][/DOUBLEPOST]Holy god this was weird as hell xD
 

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"The Girls Awaken"
By: Jamal (AKA Locatious)

Star Wars/Taken
The Girls Awaken

After finding out Layla's secret,
David is left to not trust anyone except
his wife and child.

After returning home one day from the store, he
finds out that his kid and wife have been kidnapped
by the Girls, who have awakened and reappeared.

David travel's to there base, "The Sexy Star" to find his family,
and save them. The story will take place here, and
wish luck to David!
David muttered to himself, "Motherfucking crazy ass whores taking my family, I'll teach them whose boss. Stupid crazy bitches."

After disarming two soldiers guarding the entrance to The Sexy Star, he snuck into the main frame room. He brought his little dog with him, which he had taught to use his cuteness to help him stay alive. The dog's name was "ChuBekfast."

Scamming over the camera monitors, he saw the room which his family was being locked in, which the one and only devil, "Darth Aubrey." While David used his sexy abs as a weapon, she used her (I think you know what it is, it's located in the same area xD).
Unbuttoning his shirt and revealing his abs, he walked through the hallways blinding girltroopers with his shiny abs. Once he reached the cell, he pulled back his muscled arm and punched the door, taking the door off it's hinges and smacking into Darth Aubrey's back pinning her to the floor.

Darth Aubrey then used her breast enlarger to push the door off of her, and then took out her curved sword, as did David also. He quickly untied his family and told them to wait in the hallway. As his family left, David flew off of the ground and charged Darth Aubrey.

"You don't deserver to live!" He yelled in his battle cry, and as he flew past her, she took out her sword and cut his knee.

HOLY MOTHER OF HELL THAT HURT David thought to himself. Dragging his knee behind him, he took out his ninja stars and flung them at Aubrey, which didn't impetrate her hard-steel skin.

David now understood that his sexiness was a true gift and curse, that his life was going to end because of it. In a heroic move, he dropped his sword and lunged at Aubrey with his chest out pointing towards her, and when they connected to eachother, the room exploded in a vast explosion of color!

Darth Aubrey lie on the floor, slowly disappearing into a misty force which will one day take up another body. David lifted himself up, breathing raggedly and very hoarsely. He then ran up to his wife and kissed her passionately, and took his kid's hand into his, and grabbed ChuBekfast. They went home and lived happily ever after.

As David left though, he didn't turn around to look at Aubrey's disappearing body. Darth Aubrey's body was starting to reappear, and she stuck her hand out through the rubble, and tightened her hand into a fist.

"Next time, you will be mine David..."

THE END
This was the weirdest story yet, I didn't know whether I should make Darth Aubrey have steel breasts, but I decided to go with it. This was very odd, I hope you guys like it, and get ready, Darth Aubrey is ready to strike back any moment....[DOUBLEPOST=1460995579][/DOUBLEPOST]Holy god this was weird as hell xD
You know what. Im going to gather stories from you xD.
 

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xD I'm going to make another one, but It'll probably be later tonight (for me atleast). How many points do I have now? xD
 

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xD I'm going to make another one, but It'll probably be later tonight (for me atleast). How many points do I have now? xD
15 I would be surprised if you didn't win. You have 15 entries and everyone else has either 1,2,3,5,6
 

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Well, I expect to get more points xD Tonight or tomorrow I'm going to make another story, and until then I'm going to keep posting sexy facts about you lol
 

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Well, I expect to get more points xD Tonight or tomorrow I'm going to make another story, and until then I'm going to keep posting sexy facts about you lol
What happens if you don't win?
 

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If I don't win, then I will make another story of how the girls kill david..... :) xD jk, Idk. I'm just doing this because I'm bored and because I really want a pink name :p
 

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Anyways, I'm off to work. I'll make more posts later, or if I get on my phone later at work I will make some random sexy facts xD Ttyl guys![DOUBLEPOST=1460996417][/DOUBLEPOST]PS: David is sexy because he can rock a green background in his profile picture and because he is the Owner of Curiousity >> RogueBit :) xD
 

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DRAWING WINNER NOW![DOUBLEPOST=1461022950][/DOUBLEPOST]Derrian YOU ARE THE WINNER, WHICH COLOR DO YOU PREFER MORE, GREEN OR CYAN?
 
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Good job Derrian, and have fun with your name color! Btw, I thought the drawing was on April 20th?
 

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Oh okay, well good job and thanks for doing the giveaway <3
 
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