Need critique on my edit

[EclipseCinematics]

Hello all,
i need constructive critique on my new car edit. Critique is welcome in the comment section of this thread

Link to video:

 

[Tomb]

glitch parts felt really out of place

 

[User]

glitch parts felt fine to me, main issue was the flare that ended up just looking like a random massive white spot in the middle of the video

 

[EclipseCinematics]

Thanks all, your feedback has been valuable[DOUBLEPOST=1566587221][/DOUBLEPOST]

glitch parts felt fine to me, main issue was the flare that ended up just looking like a random massive white spot in the middle of the video

What flare are you reffering to?[DOUBLEPOST=1566588971][/DOUBLEPOST]

glitch parts felt really out of place

Do you say i simply remove all glitches?

 

[User]

Thanks all, your feedback has been valuable[DOUBLEPOST=1566587221][/DOUBLEPOST]
What flare are you reffering to?[DOUBLEPOST=1566588971][/DOUBLEPOST]
Do you say i simply remove all glitches?

0:33-0:34. There's one like that displayed several times throughout the video, it looks really out of place, mainly because it doesn't fade/disperse out, just disappears

 

[Emerton]

I'd say you're edit is perfectly fine.

you've proven the cars speed through its sound, maybe if anything exaggerated slightly more personally, although besides while the car pulls in for the stop, all is well
There's always room for improvement, i'd say take each comment and into consideration and begin styling for your own alteration

 

[EclipseCinematics]

0:33-0:34. There's one like that displayed several times throughout the video, it looks really out of place, mainly because it doesn't fade/disperse out, just disappears

Oh haha, that's a light leak