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Looking for some feedback on a thread design I made. Would love any input or advice :) ... also ignore that typo in the first paragraph

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Add more dropshadow for the space between the white and aqua parts
 

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Thanks for the feedback


Add more dropshadow for the space between the white and aqua parts
Thanks for the tip, will do


A Few tips for next time
View attachment 367335
I see you've used the "pen tool" to draw the shape out, don't use that do warping with a rectangle instead. Or if you're making waves hold shift and draw them out,
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too big, also do www.domain.extension , don't add in the SSL certificate.

alignment throughout the thread is mediocre, first, it's left aligned, then center-aligned, then a bit to the center aligned.
stick with Left to right, or center, unless you vary between right and left alignment.

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box em up, or space it up.



elements like these View attachment 367339 are only restricted to the aqua , why so? have them spread out.

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give emphasis to 3 COLORS , the sub feature , it's a selling point.
Thanks for all the help, didn't think of warping a rectangle and didn't know about holding shift.
As far as alignment goes what would you recommend? I figured having everything in the center or everything aligned to the left would be a bit monotonous and look low effort. I do wish I centered "My Prices".

Also what do you mean by "box em up, or space it up."?

As far as those gray elements, they're rocks. The blue being water and the beige-yellow being a beach/island/sand.
I don't think they'd look too well in the white space and wouldn't really fit the theme I was trying to achieve
 
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Looking good but maybe try to change font...
Fix the shapes as they're looking weird if you really take a close look..

but it's looking good good luck!
 
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