Like said above, faster camera shots. Also, work on your transitions. If the camera is moving left really fast in one shot, keep it going left in th next shot, then slow it down. Also, in titles, instead of using "and" or commas, just use a new line for iach item on a list.
The sync looks really repetitive, I recommend adding some transform, shake or even twitch. The cinematics could've been a bit faster. The font is alright but could be better. The title screen with the logo looked really plain.
Now what you did well. The PvP at the start looked quite nice. The trap part where the logo came in looked quite nice too.
The colour and vibrance is actually really great. Too often you see people make trailers with little thought to what is interesting to look at, the shots are quite beautiful. The shots past 0:32 are especially eye-catching.
I would personally incorporate the logo at 0:18 with another shot so that there isn't just a black background. I would also speed up the camera at the start/end of some of the clips to make sure it doesn't feel too slow.
Probably one of my favourite trailers I've seen shared here. I wouldn't say that you're struggling. I personally enjoy the more interesting trailers as opposed to the hard trap and bass edits that feel like you're banging your head against a wall watching it.
Use visual effects (layers or animated stuff) make the text pop up on different unique ways and never make the logo last longer than 3 seconds, it gets boring, you can cut it to 50 seconds if you removed some useless stuff here and there (make sure the effects are original, sadly most of the people don't do that cuz it takes extra time but trust me, it will pay off!)
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