NEED OPINION ON MY CORPORATE FILM

[EclipseCinematics]

Hello, Seeing as my other threads requesting opinions on my various different projects helped me quite a lot, I'd like to do the same for this video.

I edited this corporate video for my production company. This time I filmed and edited this film, so I take up all responsibility for mistakes haha.

Video can be found here:

Critique welcome in the comments of this thread!

Thanks a lot

 

[root]

mate, this is genuinely so good

 

[EclipseCinematics]

mate, this is genuinely so good

Thanks a lot

 

[Elb1to]

Nice angles pal!

 

[EclipseCinematics]

This is very high quality. Very well done. I felt like you could've held the music at the same volume level even when no one is talking so it stays something in the background other than a focus point in between. But that's just preference.

Thanks a lot. I did try that in my first cut, but it didn't sound right.. Music was too quiet and there was nothing to fill that volume in

 

[Slain]

Awesome!

 

[EclipseCinematics]

Awesome!

Thanks a lot mate

 

[Miles Lu]

Great work! Real solid theme for the wedding genre. Keep continuing to grow and experiment with new effects with your future films and you'll be set.

 

[gridloc]

This is really, really awesome! I actually enjoyed watching the entire thing and never got bored or distracted. Cinematic shots are awesome and I think you did a good job on capturing the brand.

 

[gridloc]

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Insanely well put together, don't take this criticism harshly as i'm not the most experienced editor. But i wasn't a big fan on the second cut (0:06) I feel the first was enough for that building

I agree, but I think the second shot would be better to keep in since the first had that post in the way. The second one is a cleaner shot if he were to choose one.

 

[EclipseCinematics]

I agree, but I think the second shot would be better to keep in since the first had that post in the way. The second one is a cleaner shot if he were to choose one.

Thanks a lot, are there any major issues you found with the edit?

 

[gridloc]

Thanks a lot, are there any major issues you found with the edit?

Nope, I think it all looked really good.

 

[EclipseCinematics]

V2 introduces some more Warp Stabilize improvements - I need critique as I'm getting paid a lot for this, I want to make sure I do this right.