Need opinion on my edit!

[EclipseCinematics]

Hello!

Any critique on my short film would be much appreciated!

Link to vid:

 

[Ren]

Looks amazing man! Keep it up

 

[EclipseCinematics]

Looks amazing man! Keep it up

Thanks, Any critique?

 

[Ren]

Thanks, Any critique?

Well the voice actor in the background isn't my preference. Other than that, the content and transitions are very smooth.

 

[tupley]

Looks amazing man

 

[EclipseCinematics]

Yo

Well the voice actor in the background isn't my preference. Other than that, the content and transitions are very smooth.

You don't like David Attenborough!

 

[Ren]

Yo

You don't like David Attenborough!

I like him and appreciate his work in the broadcasting history, I just don't like his projection for some reason.

 

[EclipseCinematics]

I like him and appreciate his work in the broadcasting history, I just don't like his projection for some reason.

All good!

 

[blowsy]

sick