NEED OPINION ON MY FILM FOR NIKON UK

[EclipseCinematics]

Hi all,

Recently did quite a big commission for Nikon. I wanted to ask the community for some opinions on the finishing product before it's sent out. The aim of this video was to showcase the event they put on.

Please note that this is still a "temp" render, so the text and music are still being licensed and being worked on.

Link to the video here:

let me know what you think in the description

 

[Niteburn]

It's decent. The music in the video seemed too "basic" and the dude whispering was kind of weird. The timings of the clips and the transitions could be a bit better. Some of the angles seem a bit odd as well (0:38 for example). But overall nice vid!

 

[EclipseCinematics]

It's decent. The music in the video seemed too "basic" and the dude whispering was kind of weird. The timings of the clips and the transitions could be a bit better. Some of the angles seem a bit odd as well (0:38 for example). But overall nice vid!

Hi, Thanks a Lot; the music was really out of my hands.. client chose that. What would you be referring to when you say dude whispering lol?

 

[Hannes]

Yeah some of the shots are really weird, especially @ 0.38. Also you can not even read the name tags because the shots are too short

 

[EclipseCinematics]

Yeah some of the shots are really weird, especially @ 0.38. Also you can not even read the name tags because the shots are too short

Yep, thanks. Right now I'm being asked to remove the name tags, as they will have it on their longer film

 

[Stress]

this audio makes me feel weird, and the music you use isn't special. Maybe try producing something yourself? or buying some higher quality audio. The transitions are good and the audio quality of the interviewee's is good but you need to work on lighting a bit more. Not much you can do in post that would make lighting looks vastly better but its not a huge issue. Good video overall!

The guy whispering is the sound watermark. and its around the 10second mark