Need Some Feedback!!!

[moon10k]

Alright, so while you are here if you could go to my channel and drop a like on the video and subscribe that'd be nice. Anyways, so this is my 2nd minecraft skit i made. I was hoping you guys could give me some feedback on whats good and what i could do, and maybe some ideas. Thanks!

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[Sniper]

Only one part really was "cs:go", but all in all there was no storyline, it was all just random event. Didn't really enjoy tbh.

 

[Tinkergolem]

Gives off a ExplodingTnT esque vibe.

 

[moon10k]

Hello there my man! funny video you got there, keep it up.

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Gives off a ExplodingTnT esque vibe.

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Only one part really was "cs:go", but all in all there was no storyline, it was all just random event. Didn't really enjoy tbh.

Yeah. I could only get 1 person to help me since ehm i have no friends. And i would have put it "if guns were added to minecraft". But there are already videos about that, so i tried to be a little original. And I'll try to improve the storyline next time. (You could check out my first skit and tell me what ya think!)

 

[moon10k]

It was entertaining, but not really that funny. Most of your moments of comedy were very predictable.

Yeah. It's a bit hard thinking of original ideas. Since most of them are already done by popular youtubers, I tried to be a bit unique so my videos won't already be done by popular youtubers.

 

[Kram]

I don't know if I can give good advice since I have never really enjoyed these types of videos.
I feel like there were too many music changes throughout the song. I understand the meme sounds/songs but the main background song should be more I guess constant.
A little more CS:GO would probably have been beneficial since I feel like the first half was just about noob vs pro kind of thing and the second part was fully about guns.
I hope that made sense.
I do definitely like the actual shooting of the video it's quite smooth and put together well. In my opinion at least.

 

[Satan]

I feel like there were too many music changes throughout the song.

I beg to differ. It matched what was being played. I loved it

I suggest making the humorous/comedy scenes more often. I really only got to see one in the smack middle of the 2nd half of the vid. so 3/4 there with the "OH HELL NO"

 

[Kram]

I beg to differ. It matched what was being played. I loved it

I suggest making the humorous/comedy scenes more often. I really only got to see one in the smack middle of the 2nd half of the vid. so 3/4 there with the "OH HELL NO"

I forgot what these videos are supposed to sound like. I guess I personally don't like that type of background music so that may be effecting my thought.

 

[Satan]

I forgot what these videos are supposed to sound like. I guess I personally don't like that type of background music so that may be effecting my thought.

There's no "supposed to sound like" I simply stated I disagree with your personal taste its alright, I think its a good average skit video. Probably leaning more towards amateur side though moon10k. I suggest working on better scene transition and maybe some more comedy in most parts.

 

[moon10k]

There's no "supposed to sound like" I simply stated I disagree with your personal taste its alright, I think its a good average skit video. Probably leaning more towards amateur side though moon10k. I suggest working on better scene transition and maybe some more comedy in most parts.

Alright thanks so much for the advice man! I'll start spending more time coming up with ideas and try to make the video longer. As for the transition part i don't know how i could make that better.