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I love it bro, you've improved so much recently. Though I do have to ask, what shaders are you using?
BSL and BetterFoliage modpack[DOUBLEPOST=1552822122][/DOUBLEPOST]
I love it bro, you've improved so much recently. Though I do have to ask, what shaders are you using?
But it is mostly color correction that I did myself, here's the before and after :p
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Working on a HUGE project next, need an appraisal and more tips, I want the feedback to mainly focus on the intro and outro as they're very weak and some found it quite boring, but if you have feedback on my cinematics, make sure to leave that too, I will greatly appreciate any response.

Aekalix I hope that you have time to help me a bit, but if not, it's all good.
 

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Eh, generic honestly.

There isn't much wrong with it (I don't have time to thoroughly judge the scenes, sorry). Good shots as far as I can see and it fits as a trailer. And indeed, the intro is mediocre at best.

A 3 second long black transition is a bit too much. I don't like how the text fades first in the outro then the whole screen starts to dim. An outro of 10 seconds with nothing happening is also a bit much. Yes, the outro is bland...
 

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Eh, generic honestly.

There isn't much wrong with it (I don't have time to thoroughly judge the scenes, sorry). Good shots as far as I can see and it fits as a trailer. And indeed, the intro is mediocre at best.

A 3 second long black transition is a bit too much. I don't like how the text fades first in the outro then the whole screen starts to dim. An outro of 10 seconds with nothing happening is also a bit much. Yes, the outro is bland...
Yeah, I will probably stay on the generic track until I am satisfied with my "skills", since they're simple and easy to work with and are a great practice
 
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Would love feedback and an appraisal

Very nice work :)
Next thing to do is to include more scenes where the background match up. For example, when the pvp-skywars envoys text comes in you could put some pvp instead of a normal shot. Try minimizing the normal shots (not removing them entirely). I hope i helped you :)
 

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Very nice work :)
Next thing to do is to include more scenes where the background match up. For example, when the pvp-skywars envoys text comes in you could put some pvp instead of a normal shot. Try minimizing the normal shots (not removing them entirely). I hope i helped you :)
No players were available , this is the PVP arena, thought it was enough
What texture pack did you use whilst making this?
Vap0ur's Pack
Great work mate, I know this is an unusual question but, have you can any tips on starting trailers?
This video : for remapping
Use BSL shaders, adjust colors with Colorista IV and LUTs
Use Vap0ur texture pack, use betterfoliage mod, put low FOV and edit with AE

Also, I prefer to render at the cinematic aspect ratio [1920x803 (or 816)] rather than adding annoying unnecessary black bars

Natural bars from the aspect ratio > Random black rectangles on the screen
 
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Can I pay for your shake and text animation presets? not much as I dont have much on my second paypal ); though i really liked your sync
 

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Can I pay for your shake and text animation presets? not much as I dont have much on my second paypal ); though i really liked your sync
I do not own it but add me on discord, I'll redirect you with the owners[DOUBLEPOST=1553256512][/DOUBLEPOST]
inb4 sundide trashes

jk, good job bro definitely you've improved
bruh he never trashed me, he good boy
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we also had a conversation last night cuz he gonna be gone oof, gl to him
 

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