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Woah, that thread design looks bad ass.

Wanna hit me up with a vouch copy? >;D
 

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Your portfolio looks of a pretty decent quality, good job!

There are some typos in your thread design however.
Suggested changes:
  • "...about a year and a bit now new."
  • "...free on another forums site., but"
  • "...on each piece.s of gfx purchases by my customers."
  • "Pm me on the forums..."
  • "you will get a smallpercentage reduced from the amount that you owe for what you are purchasing.".
    This sentence doesn't flow very well, I'd rewrite it as:
    "you'll get a (small) discount."
Some further suggestions:
  • The prices are a bit odd. 3.75$, 3.35$, 3.15$, 0.75$ are very specific numbers, I'd round them to the next half.
  • You're using full caps on a large body of text. This makes the text hard to read, which you really don't want when trying to get people to read what you have to say. I think the font you used was Code Pro, which does have a lowercase (Code Pro LC) variant. Try using that one?
  • Try to not use too many fontsizes in one image. You're going from a 100pt in the headings to a 62pt in the main text followed by a 128pt, 90pt, 390pt, 240pt and 86pt in the price-section. If you be a bit more consistent the text would feel more like a whole.
  • For extra points in consistency, either add the * (for extra information) before a sentence or after one, but don't switch that between sentences.

Your work looks great, good luck here!
 

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Your portfolio looks of a pretty decent quality, good job!

There are some typos in your thread design however.
Suggested changes:
  • "...about a year and a bit now new."
  • "...free on another forums site., but"
  • "...on each piece.s of gfx purchases by my customers."
  • "Pm me on the forums..."
  • "you will get a smallpercentage reduced from the amount that you owe for what you are purchasing.".
    This sentence doesn't flow very well, I'd rewrite it as:
    "you'll get a (small) discount."
Some further suggestions:
  • The prices are a bit odd. 3.75$, 3.35$, 3.15$, 0.75$ are very specific numbers, I'd round them to the next half.
  • You're using full caps on a large body of text. This makes the text hard to read, which you really don't want when trying to get people to read what you have to say. I think the font you used was Code Pro, which does have a lowercase (Code Pro LC) variant. Try using that one?
  • Try to not use too many fontsizes in one image. You're going from a 100pt in the headings to a 62pt in the main text followed by a 128pt, 90pt, 390pt, 240pt and 86pt in the price-section. If you be a bit more consistent the text would feel more like a whole.
  • For extra points in consistency, either add the * (for extra information) before a sentence or after one, but don't switch that between sentences.

Your work looks great, good luck here!
Thanks for your input but the first one isn't a typo ._. Its meant to say now, not new..
 

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Ah I see it too now, my bad!
I will edit the things you've suggested, apart from the prices, I'm keeping them the same unless I decide to change them in the future. I'm also keeping the text sizes the same.
 

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Vouch, very talented m'lady. Made me a nice profile picture for my skin ;)
 

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Do you make Drawn Avatars? or just Minecraft :)!
Just Rendered Minecraft stuff. I tried to learn to draw but I gave up and I may start to do none Minecraft related things soon.
 

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Vouch! Known Raawr since she started graphics, and hasn't stopped trying :)
You knew me way before I started graphics.. You turd.
 

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