New SoundCloud track

[itslyn]

Yo guys, what do you all think? Spent a while on this and I think I improved a lot compared to my other tracks.

 

[Donnie Bravo]

Wow this is some good stuff. The main idea/concept is great, but it gets old pretty quickly, I would work on creating variation in the song. Work on building and releasing tension, creating a b section, try mixing your features vocals differently, anything to keep the listener interested and not bored. Also your mix is a little muddy, I get that is kind of the vibe, but there are some sounds that I hear that just clash with the rest of the track.

 

[itslyn]

Wow this is some good stuff. The main idea/concept is great, but it gets old pretty quickly, I would work on creating variation in the song. Work on building and releasing tension, creating a b section, try mixing your features vocals differently, anything to keep the listener interested and not bored.

Thanks man! That's some seriously helpful advice