New track: "Purpose" | Let me hear your thoughts!

[Day]

Hey! Nice to see you all again. I've been producing a bit more since the last time I posted. I just recently made a super chill track called "Purpose". Looking for some feedback on this, seeing what you all think! It's a rap beat but also sort of lofi for chill vibes; could be anything really.


I also dropped "Space Time Continuum" which is another great & chill track / rap beat. Let me hear your thoughts on that as well!





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[Young_Explicit]

Nice, more vaporwave pls.

 

[Day]

Nice, more vaporwave pls.

Yes indeed

 

[yo]

Purpose -
Sounds great, but from a theory point of view it could use some secondary dominants or some kind of better resolution while giving the bass a bit of diversity while retaining a chill kind of sound. This is something that varies by listeners, but modulating they key while keeping the same rhythm wouldn't hurt as I'm sure the listener can retain the melody easily. Although this repetitiveness makes it something that I would love the first times I hear it, after the first couple of times the static melody might become a turnoff for some.

Space Time Continuum -
I love it but I don't believe this will fit the chill category as much as I would like it to. You could definitely give the drum set some more diversity and complexity and letting it take a bit of a larger role in the song. I love the different melodies you have going on though. At 00:50, I like this transition a lot and the style that continues to 01:07.

I think these are both great, and I can definitely tell you have a love of repetition haha. I'd say as long as your keeping them as a template for rap and hip-hop or chill, keeping this repetition is fine. But I can also say from experience that learning to bring in different forms (rondo for example is something that is similar to your style but brings in an extra melody generally after the second A/main melody) can interest many rappers. More short intricate/unique parts in your melody would be a great addition if I were to recommend something specific especially if you go into hip-hop more. Great job nonetheless, keep it up :tup: