Opinions? First Attempt I've made

[InfinityBuilding]

Heyo, I'm a developer and this was my first time making a trailer so just wondering if anyone has some suggestions or notices anything that could be better with it? thanks

 

[InfinityBuilding]

maybe not have a song about amphetamine? and I think "Sever IP 999sh*t.net" font should be a little bolder and maybe a different font? thats just my opinion though but for your first attempt it looks good!

Okay thank you for the input! Yeah we advertise to 7 million people across 5 accounts on Instagram, TikTok, and youtube and many of these accounts are offensive memepages etc so the community/playerbase is usually more on the toxic side and we use songs/themes to kinda fit that but the players are always really nice great people usually in college so I don't mind it.

 

[InfinityBuilding]

yeah sadly minecraft has such a scummy community, I remember the old times where I would join a server and everyone was super nice and really kind.

Yeah definitely same haha I've played for over 8 years now used to be a great time. Like 80% of the people who join though from these accounts are actually really chill. Also the whole amphetamine thing, I took that as a reference to adderall but I definitely see how that could mean other things as well

 

[InfinityBuilding]

personally I think there should be a vanilla server like this:
Name: Safe Space or some junk like this
Motive: a place for non toxic players

Yes that would be amazing haha I would definitely make something like that if this wasn't my full time job but gotta just stick with what makes money right now :/

 

[Theo J]

Well, I can tell it's a first attempt haha, but music choice works for how you paced the trailers. You had some nice transitions, and there was a lot of informative content about the server. Downsides I'd bring up are a lack of quality color grading, but that is also due to the shaders you used blowing up light in some areas. Text and other transitions felt kind of cheesy, like going ham on WordArt as a second grader because you think all the text effects and fonts look cool. Sometimes, less is more

 

[InfinityBuilding]

Well, I can tell it's a first attempt haha, but music choice works for how you paced the trailers. You had some nice transitions, and there was a lot of informative content about the server. Downsides I'd bring up are a lack of quality color grading, but that is also due to the shaders you used blowing up light in some areas. Text and other transitions felt kind of cheesy, like going ham on WordArt as a second grader because you think all the text effects and fonts look cool. Sometimes, less is more

Hahahah yes that's exactly how I felt the whole time. Thanks for your input, any advice for future ones especially with the color grading part? I'm just a developer so yeah haven't done a ton of trailer making just made my own cause I couldn't find any good other ones. Mainly was excited to throw some blotter edits in there and they were decent. What's the best shaders to use? Also I understand the flashing effects kinda as I did but how do you make them smoother and just like slowly fading in and out is that just super slow keyframes or fusion or something? I don't understand how to make them like Woodzy and Danny's

 

[Sullybash12]

I'd go with more cinematic music, along with some font changes and maybe a voice changer in the first part, or no voice at all?

 

[Harrison Sawyer]

personally I think there should be a vanilla server like this:
Name: Safe Space or some junk like this
Motive: a place for non toxic players

hmmmmmm

might work on something like this