Opinions on a hand-drawn banner

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I would like some feedback on this banner. I had made a couple of days ago. To go a long with this picture you can check out a speed art I had posted on a new channel (totally not shamelessly advertising or anything)

Also please excuse the cringy ass talking at the end of the video

 

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* My one problem is: the very right side of the background is super empty. Originally there was a forest in one version, and a lake in a second version. Neither versions looked good but this is bothering me *

 

[DEKU]

Background looks really good, but the characters look a bit high..

 

[Checklist]

Background looks really good, but the characters look a bit high..

Never know

 

[DEKU]

Just one question, how much would this be?

 

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Just one question, how much would this be?

$15 - $25 depending on what you want. Some may say it's a bit expensive but you get a matching profile picture a long with this for free.

 

[Picturesque]

Looks really good for a hand drawn!

 

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VC?

As of right now I do not have the time to hand out any vouch copies as I am dealing with work and school. Sorry [DOUBLEPOST=1510433959][/DOUBLEPOST]

Looks really good for a hand drawn!

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the kind words!

 

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All good, good luck with school!

Thank you

 

[Chief.]

Looks good just a few things:
Circle window and stepping stones in Minecraft? IMPOSSIBLE! /s

Also maybe make the V more defined. At first look it looks like "Lost Pup"
Other than those it's super well done. Good work OP

 

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Looks good just a few things:
Circle window and stepping stones in Minecraft? IMPOSSIBLE! /s

Also maybe make the V more defined. At first look it looks like "Lost Pup"
Other than those it's super well done. Good work OP

maybe when I get time I will update the stepping stones and the circle window and thank you for the critism on the "V" now when I look at it, all I see is a "U" now xD.. I would hate to see a lost pup

 

[Chief.]

maybe when I get time I will update the stepping stones and the circle window and thank you for the critism on the "V" now when I look at it, all I see is a "U" now xD.. I would hate to see a lost pup

Can't have any lost puppies roaming. When you get some free time Id love to get a design of a hand drawn character!

 

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Can't have any lost puppies roaming. When you get some free time Id love to get a design of a hand drawn character!

You can message me any time you'd like. I have 2 open commissions right now but after that I am free I would suggest placing an order in as soon as possible so you keep a place in line