Opinions on my art?

[ZoeyPlayzMC]

Hi!
So, I made a thread for opinions on my art, but it got old by now. xD
(It had my older art in it)
Now, this is a newer thread for my newer art.
So, all I want are opinions, and if you think I'm ready to start comissions.

You can rate it like this:
Lineart: _/10
Coloring: _/10
Shading and Lighting: _/10
Overall look and proportions: _/10
Anything I can do to improve: ________

If you can take the time to do that, then thanks a MILLION, it really helps
to know how others think of your art at a first glance, and it helps improve faster.
Thanks!

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[ZoeyPlayzMC]

Lineart: 8-9/10
Coloring: 7/10
Shading and Lighting: 5/10
Overall look and proportions: 7/10
Anything I can do to improve: Really like the way the characters look but the shading can be improved on especially on the folds in the clothing, colors are a bit bland (but that's just my opinion, I like a lot of color) but overall the drawings are fantastic.

Thanks alot! I'll defiantly try to work on my shading and coloring!

 

[Grady]

The proportions of the arms on the first picture are off.

 

[ZoeyPlayzMC]

The proportions of the arms on the first picture are off.

Woah, really?

I think one thing that would definitely help with your art is if you were to look at pictures of actual people and see how proportions are like there. For the most part, everything looks very good. You should try to make the heads a little bit smaller on the close up images because they seem to be bigger than the body haha.
Also, when shading, one thing I like to do is to pick a point and say that point is going to be the light source, then work with shading from there. And remember that when you look at someone, you see reflective light, as well, since light bounces off of the surrounding. So even if you shade the underside of the jaw, the edge will still be a bit lighter because of reflective light.
Keep up the good work, though!

Yeah, haha, I'll do that, I just find it weird using references. xD
For the head size thing, that's sort of my style. xD If it looks weird that way, I can understand though.
And yup, I'm trying to get better at shading, I'll defiantly listen to your advice! Thank you!

 

[snyggaleo10]

Lineart: _9/10
Coloring: _8/10
Shading and Lighting: _6/10
Overall look and proportions: _8/10
Anything I can do to improve: It looks really awesome! What you could try to improve is the shading and lightning because i don't see too much of that but overall, Really good i must say!

 

[ZoeyPlayzMC]

Lineart: _9/10
Coloring: _8/10
Shading and Lighting: _6/10
Overall look and proportions: _8/10
Anything I can do to improve: It looks really awesome! What you could try to improve is the shading and lightning because i don't see too much of that but overall, Really good i must say!

Thank you so much! Yup, ik my coloring and shading isn't the best, xD
I'm practicing it, so, thanks a lot for your advice!

 

[snyggaleo10]

Thank you so much! Yup, ik my coloring and shading inst the best, xD
I'm practicing it, so, thanks a lot for your advice!

Yeah no worries, you will be the best one ever to do that if you practice!