Opinions on my artwork

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https://gyazo.com/47a0ffa08073ff47d8dda2c835f387f4
https://gyazo.com/a3ce559e9aab3fcd3b0a8d68ea852041

 

[Phillip E]

Looks like your headed in a great direction!

 

[EpiPlex]

the lines should be thinner and try to work on the font of your text, other wise, everything looks great!

 

[iFoot]

Add some color >.<

 

[EpiPlex]

Add some color >.<

yeah lol

 

[Furex]

Add details on the letter etc...

 

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Your not even the Original Poster.

I am the original poster, I made another thread like this
though I took it down right

The lines don't even connect.

They look like they connect to me.... where do they not connect please show me[DOUBLEPOST=1469133226][/DOUBLEPOST]

Add some color >.<

It was just a base model design... adding detail later on I will post that on this thread[DOUBLEPOST=1469133279][/DOUBLEPOST]

Looks like your headed in a great direction!

Great, thanks [DOUBLEPOST=1469133409][/DOUBLEPOST]

It looks nice! but you should keep practicing hard for shading. That doesn't seem like a strong quality in your art. You don't just need to make one white line for shading. And I wouldn't use just black and white for it, but lighter and darker shades of the color.

Thanks, I will practice more (that was my first time), thanks for the advice! :tup: