Opinions on my first ever build?

[Jeremine]

was bored and had free time so i made this
what do you guys think ? (actual criticism please)

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[Satan]

Pretty bland, not alot of block variance. Not worth to sell at all.

 

[dawn]

For a first build, a mainly-terraforming build especially, it's great! I love the trees and everything - You may want to work on the colours and/or blank space a bit more. Try adding some grass and broken down things maybe!

 

[Jeremine]

Pretty bland, not alot of block variance. Not worth to sell at all.

yes, i understand it's bland. it's my very FIRST ever build
and i am nowhere near ready to sell my work yet!

For a first build, a mainly-terraforming build especially, it's great! I love the trees and everything - You may want to work on the colours and/or blank space a bit more. Try adding some grass and broken down things maybe!

what do you mean grass? the build is suppose to be a hell / dark stoney type of build. but thanks!

 

[dawn]

yes, i understand it's bland. it's my very FIRST ever build
and i am nowhere near ready to sell my work yet!

what do you mean grass? the build is suppose to be a hell / dark stoney type of build. but thanks!

If it's hell, why there trees xd - But just find small ways to put nature in the build, regardless what way it is. It'll make it nicer

 

[Tinkergolem]

In my opinion, the stone and cobblestone do not go well into the build. maybe replace it with variations of clay?

 

[Jeremine]

arches

 

[arches]

sloppy terraforming, no structure, lava pool looks horrible, poor block mixing, and it just looks empty

if you made those trees yourself those are the only thing decent in the build

10 minutes though, and I could really transform the build. Smooth out the terrain, add in some tall grass around the build, a small structure in the middle and mix some more blocks into the stone and it wouldn't be so bad