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So I made this, ops? Will move the second line down a bit and then it should be gut
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Looks really good :eek:
 

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Looks fine, the gradient on the D is too hard, I would smooth out the color transition. I'm not sure but the angled white shape to the right of the page looks likes it's part of the background (I don't know if this is intentional or not). Lastly, the button should follow the casing of the menu or vice versa. Overall clean design, if you'd like to get this developed, feel free to contact me.
 

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Looks fine, the gradient on the D is too hard, I would smooth out the color transition. I'm not sure but the angled white shape to the right of the page looks likes it's part of the background (I don't know if this is intentional or not). Lastly, the button should follow the casing of the menu or vice versa. Overall clean design, if you'd like to get this developed, feel free to contact me.
Thanks for your reply! The white corner is meant to be as a background. Ill take a look into changing the gradient, however its also a school project so I need to make it myself. Thanks for the offer tho :D
 

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Looks great, only input I have is dim down the super mint green your using, I find it hard to read personally :p Great work tho!
Thanks! Mint is personally my favorite color so its easy for me to over use it. Ill look into it.
 

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Thanks! Mint is personally my favorite color so its easy for me to over use it. Ill look into it.
when making a site its also a wise decision to research which shade of certain colors are good to use
eg. I tend to stay away from colors that majority of color blind people can't see as intended
or perhaps if someone has bad vision they will have hard time reading white text on light background like in your case

otherwise its a good design I like it
 
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