Opinions on my video !

[Daniel]

Title says all, did a new editing style and new intro. Looking for constructive criticism, please and thank you.

 

[Topzie]

Quality is still an issue.

 

[KA]

- Thumbnail is not very "clickbaity" (not something I would click on)
- The video quality could be improved
- I don't recommend background music for videos especially music with words (music is alright for streaming if you stream)
- Sometimes you stop talking for a little too long could be edited down a bit
- Remove the text intro lol they are cringe
- Use video tags
- Don't talk about youtube stats
idk thats all for now for this video

 

[Daniel]

- Thumbnail is not very "clickbaity" (not something I would click on)
- The video quality could be improved
- I don't recommend background music for videos especially music with words (music is alright for streaming if you stream)
- Sometimes you stop talking for a little too long could be edited down a bit
- Remove the text intro lol they are cringe
- Use video tags
- Don't talk about youtube stats
idk thats all for now for this video

A friend got me the intro I thought i liked it but I guess I’ll remove it