Opinions on my work

[Select]

How's this render, pretty basic, im gonna try way more effect in a minute

 

[rome.]

How's this render, pretty basic, im gonna try way more effect in a minute

pretty good, but photoshop effects would finish it of

 

[EggyAzalea]

Looks nice, as said above, a few little effects will do all the difference!

 

[Select]

pretty good, but photoshop effects would finish it of

thx im working on it rn[DOUBLEPOST=1500055669][/DOUBLEPOST]

Looks nice, as said above, a few little effects will do all the difference!

thx im working on it rn

 

[Pakistan]

Not bad what rig and lightroom?

 

[Juno_]

Your extrusions need working on and the positioning of the character is a little static, try make him look more active.

 

[Select]

Not bad what rig and lightroom?

FMR 5.0, & i made it myself the lightroom[DOUBLEPOST=1500055803][/DOUBLEPOST]

Your extrusions need working on and the positioning of the character is a little static, try make him look more active.

yes i agree

 

[Pakistan]

In my mind this is a good extrusion

 

[Kram]

In my mind this is a good extrusion
View attachment 71136

I actually disagree with that.
Do you see how the hair is just floating on the top? That shouldn't really happen as it looks odd.

 

[Kram]

Did you extrude? I only see 3 parts in this that have something that looks extruded.
Also, what is going on with the bottom half of the eye? It seems to be popping out.
The overall pose isn't bad it is just a little basic and normal.
It would be better if he was running towards something, looking at something, try to make it so there is a reason he is running.

 

[Pakistan]

I actually disagree with that.
Do you see how the hair is just floating on the top? That shouldn't really happen as it looks odd.

Yhh The Rendering went a bit bad for that part :/

 

[Kram]

^ Found this image by SummonVenom. That is an example of a good pose and afterward with effects. (I can't do photoshop this good but it's the first good example I found)

 

[rome.]

^ Found this image by SummonVenom. That is an example of a good pose and afterward with effects. (I can't do photoshop this good but it's the first good example I found)

I think he is just a starter, summonvemom is a professional with years and years of experience.

 

[Kram]

I think he is just a starter, summonvemom is a professional with years and years of experience.

There is always something to work towards
I just gave a very professional example of a good pose with good extrude and at the same time an unique pose.

 

[Select]

^ Found this image by SummonVenom. That is an example of a good pose and afterward with effects. (I can't do photoshop this good but it's the first good example I found)

Could you send me the packs you use for edits

 

[Kram]

Could you send me the packs you use for edits

That's not my work. It was made by this person https://twitter.com/SummonVenom

 

[Select]

Everyone im done the edit probably could do fix ups but i like it

 

[pcranaway]

Good position, You need to do something with the mouth and the eyes. Disable it for better result next time.

 

[rome.]

Good position, You need to do something with the mouth and the eyes. Disable it for better result next time.

There were no eyes or mouths enabled? the mouth was added later in ps and that are the eyes of the skin it self