Opinions on new piece of music.

[twinightcreep0]

Hello MCM members.
In my spare time, I write and record music.
Written a piece this afternoon, but not sure if I like it or not.
Wanted to hear other people's opinions to see if it is actually good or not.
With music, different people hear different things.
Thanks,
Twinight


*Sound isn't great with ZippyShare.*

 

[ShiftClicker]

Amazing I love it! I got the Goosebumps.

 

[twinightcreep0]

Amazing I love it! I got the Goosebumps.

That's good to hear haha. I'll PM you another piece that I've written. I much prefer that one.

 

[ShiftClicker]

Okay great!

 

[XMario]

That really good. This type of music is great for fantasy game menu background song.

 

[twinightcreep0]

That really good. This type of music is great for fantasy game menu background song.

Haha, thanks!
I actually wrote this piece to add to my portfolio for people interested in music for games.
Didn't turn out as good as I wanted though
I'll just put the piece that I sent to ShiftClicker here.
Much prefer this one:

But isn't really 'written' for a game.

 

[DeusTheOx]

at 1:19-1:45 sounds too "busy". I think you need to make some adjustments on the strings. The transition at 1:45 is a bit harsh. Otherwise, great work! Keep it up!

 

[twinightcreep0]

at 1:19-1:45 sounds too "busy". I think you need to make some adjustments on the strings. The transition at 1:45 is a bit harsh. Otherwise, great work! Keep it up!

Thank you.
I personally disagree that it sounds too busy, and think that the ends sound busier with all the timpani.
However, all musicians hear different things
And yes, that transition is awful
Thanks for your kind words!

 

[Marth]

I love the first piece. I think it takes too long to develop into that climactic point, and because of that there are some transitional flaws. I actually dislike the second piece that you prefer more, partly because of that annoying note you're using. I see what you tried to do there though. I just like melodic strings--again, just me.

 

[MostlySnakes]

What did you use for this fruity loops, ableton, garageband, etc?

 

[twinightcreep0]

I love the first piece. I think it takes too long to develop into that climactic point, and because of that there are some transitional flaws. I actually dislike the second piece that you prefer more, partly because of that annoying note you're using. I see what you tried to do there though. I just like melodic strings--again, just me.

Everyone has their own opinion and I respect that.
When writing that first one, I didn't want to rush into the climatic point as you said, and it looks like it might have dragged out a bit.
Maybe one day I'll return to this piece and change bits or make it longer.

I've always been and always will be a big fan of Jazz.
The piece I've written is right up my alley as far as the styles that I like.
I understand that not everyone is the same, just thought I'd point out that it's what I prefer.
Thanks for your opinion and kind words [DOUBLEPOST=1494786653][/DOUBLEPOST]

What did you use for this fruity loops, ableton, garageband, etc?

This was all done on my keyboard