Opinions On This Hand Drawn Logo

[Rainy]

So i got a drawing tablet a couple of days ago and i am slowly get the hand to eye cords and i decided to give a try of drawing a logo so heres what i got so far.

This is my first proper drawing with my new tablet.

Could u give opinions on it and what i can improve on etc?

I also drew lines over it to stop people stealing it

 

[Spenser]

It looks nice. The grass looks like its melting off of the island. IMO

 

[Rainy]

Look amazing! Better than probably anyone can do!
I bet people can agree.

Thanks dude.

 

[Shroomy]

Sick!

 

[Rainy]

It looks nice. The grass looks like its melting off of the island. IMO

Thanks. il add some stuff to the grass. Thanks

 

[Krazy]

some of the lines look a bit too triangular but other than that it's a great start of something

 

[Rainy]

Sick!

Thanks

some of the lines look a bit too triangular but other than that it's a great start of something

Thanks for the feedback. i appreciate it.

 

[NotOkay]

I like. Could sell that as a logo template (or whatever they're called)

 

[ethansuda]

Looks very nice.

 

[Rainy]

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I like. Could sell that as a logo template (or whatever they're called)

Good idea

 

[PizzaPlaysMC]

Looks awesome, nice drawing skills!

 

[Rainy]

Looks awesome, nice drawing skills!

 

[Lemon Design]

It looks ok for the beginning. I think that there is just a lot to practice.
Personally i would add some more detail although it is a cartoon drawing. And maybe i would add some shadows, light and light reflections.

 

[Rainy]

It looks ok for the beginning. I think that there is just a lot to practice.
Personally i would add some more detail although it is a cartoon drawing. And maybe i would add some shadows, light and light reflections.

Thanks. Il try and add more detail. Thanks for the feedback[DOUBLEPOST=1465396620][/DOUBLEPOST]

Looks really good practice makes perfect

Thanks