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[EpiPlex]

Hey I recently finished a piece of art work and now looking on ways I can improve. Please Post it down below

 

[EpiPlex]

My personal opinion : The word 'War' is a bit off style than others? since like the others were shined in different styles and the WAR is more like its computer-done ( Gradient tool ? #MeNoPaintOnPC ) anyway yeah It'll look nice if it has the shines of the ice part !

yeah i was in a rush at that part, i was about to draw it as u can see in the video but the due date was closer than I thought