Opinions

[Maxy]

Just started these type of wallpapers. Needing some advice. This is my first attempt. Please rate this 1-10, and leave one thing I can improve on.

 

[Deep]

Looks neat, I suggest adding the glare effect to the whole word. 8/10?

 

[Krythax]

do something to the background maybe, a little too boring.

 

[Maxy]

do something to the background maybe, a little too boring.

As I said, that was my first one.[DOUBLEPOST=1494199541][/DOUBLEPOST]

6.9/10

Leave feedback please.

 

[Krythax]

As I said, that was my first one.

Yeah, the rest us great! Good job for your first one.

 

[Maxy]

Too simplistic.

That is not very helpful.

 

[Kram]

The text looks really good but, Tyler Aka Tyrone is right the rest of it is really simplistic. Which could work if that is what you are looking for but personally it is too simplistic for my taste.

 

[Hannes]

It looks really nice just add effects in the background behind the text such as shapes, patterns, really anything that'll make it look like more is going on.

With a low opacity and it will look great!

 

[TemMer]

Just started these type of wallpapers. Needing some advice. This is my first attempt. Please rate this 1-10, and leave one thing I can improve on.

(Saying what I think..not here to trash or other..just saying my opinion as you requested)
Rating: 6,5/7
The background is not one of the best, I would have added some grunges on it (you can find some in the KRVKEN PACK).
I don't like the text that much, it's pretty simple, the font tho is awesome. The back text is too dark, I would have putted it under the text above, to make that 3D ish effect, and added a bit of more color and a better Shadow (gradient or so). For the text color, it's too simplistic. I would have gone with something more "happy" (Rainbow etc..) or that matches (in this case a light blue & White). But anyway, for your first time, it's good! Just need a bit more of improvements and just try adding/change stuff.
This is all, I hope that I helped you, good luck man

 

[Ceni]

background colour is a little bit solid, maybe try brush it with lighter colours or add effect to it ( Gradient are nice )

 

[Maxy]

(Saying what I think..not here to trash or other..just saying my opinion as you requested)
Rating: 6,5/7
The background is not one of the best, I would have added some grunges on it (you can find some in the KRVKEN PACK).
I don't like the text that much, it's pretty simple, the font tho is awesome. The back text is too dark, I would have putted it under the text above, to make that 3D ish effect, and added a bit of more color and a better Shadow (gradient or so). For the text color, it's too simplistic. I would have gone with something more "happy" (Rainbow etc..) or that matches (in this case a light blue & White). But anyway, for your first time, it's good! Just need a bit more of improvements and just try adding/change stuff.
This is all, I hope that I helped you, good luck man

That was my first one. So don't be trashing my thread.