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[YahiaShaker]

I've recently got into illustrations and found a fun hobby, which is to make isometric illustrations which are basically 3d illustrations. I've made my first one and am wondering if the quality is on par to being sold, and whether this style would be demanded or not. Please keep this thread on topic.

Spoiler: The Laptop Isometric Illustration

 

[TofuLong]

IMO looking good, as long as you can design it to client wants it can be sold.

 

[SolarPH]

That's good, but there's one error in your illustration. The one at the topmost part of the image didn't follow the angle of the other Left-to-Top lines.

 

[LocalApe]

The gradient shouldn't repeat itself as each key will have a different shadow depending on the location of your light source. I also noticed you have nothing connecting the laptop screen to the keyboard. It's a very minor detail but definitely one that stands out if you look at it long enough. Back to the gradient, I personally find that using gradients in such minimal designs ruins them. It looks very amateur as if you didn't know what to detail the keys with. If you simply just add the QWERTY keyboard letters to it and remove the gradient it would look great (Obviously make sure they fit into perspective.) I'm not sure how small or large it will be used but little details matter. Please keep in mind these are just my opinions, do whatever you feel looks best.

 

[71F]

Looks great imo, but it's just that around the edges of the screen, you can see like some unfilled pixels.

 

[YahiaShaker]

Thanks everyone for your feedback, I didn’t expect this much feedback. Also, the image attached is around 3kx3k pixels and if I’m going to use it in designs I’m going to shrink it to around 200x200 so the minor details don’t really matter, but I’ll keep in mind what you guys said in my next illustrations. Thanks again guys