Opinions.

[gap]

I just made up a thread design for my staff application writing service (link in signature).
What's your opinions on it?

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[dawn]

If you don’t have a big graphics design background, this isn’t too bad. I’d suggest using less harsh of a gradient where it shows the checks, along with repositioning the “Profesisonal Quality” thing since it looks out of place, otherwise, it’s nice.

Also, not sure if I’m mis reading but there’s a grammar mistake in the Astonishing English & Grammar section. “I have am a 100% English speaker.”

 

[gap]

If you don’t have a big graphics design background, this isn’t too bad. I’d suggest using less harsh of a gradient where it shows the checks along with repositioning the “Profesisonal Quality” thing since it looks out of place, otherwise, it’s nice.

Also, not sure if I’m mis reading but there’s a grammar mistake in the Astonishing English & Grammar section. “I have am a 100% English speaker.”

Thanks!
I do not have a background in design also
The typo in "Astonishing English & Grammar" is also such a silly mistake. I have used two different texts to make the thread design and must've edited out those bits, thanks for picking that up =)

 

[Iconic]

This looks good imo, however the only thing that is weird is the amount of space you used in the background for the title in comparison to everything else.

 

[Demeng]

Looks nice, but I would make all 4 check marks the same color.

This looks good imo, however the only thing that is weird is the amount of space you used in the background for the title in comparison to everything else.

I prefer the header larger than everything else.

 

[gap]

This looks good imo, however the only thing that is weird is the amount of space you used in the background for the title in comparison to everything else.

Thanks!

Looks nice, but I would make all 4 check marks the same color.

I prefer the header larger than everything else.

I agree!

 

[Tyyppi_PVP]

I just made up a thread design for my staff application writing service (link in signature).
What's your opinions on it?

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I would have contact information also below the payments thing. Looks pretty good however the next opinion is just mine and probably no one else will agree but anyway. I don't really like how the $30 dollar option is the largest to me it seems pushy

 

[Invisibility]

Pretty good imo! Good Luck!

 

[Mason.]

I suggest giving discounts for more words purchased. Like, if they purchase 1,000 words for $10, they obviously know they can purchase 3,000 for $30. You know?

 

[gap]

I suggest giving discounts for more words purchased. Like, if they purchase 1,000 words for $10, they obviously know they can purchase 3,000 for $30. You know?

Ahhh!
That is a good idea, will take that into consideration!

Pretty good imo! Good Luck!

Thanks =)

I would have contact information also below the payments thing. Looks pretty good however the next opinion is just mine and probably no one else will agree but anyway. I don't really like how the $30 dollar option is the largest to me it seems pushy

I was thinking of this, but I don't know yet.