Please leave feedback on my Video

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This video took approximatly 3hrs, due to it being my first video and having to watch 10 minute tutorials each time i wanted to try something new, anyways rest a side all of that here is my work.


There are small issues, because i was too short on time to get to them

 

[ziggyy]

making the whole thing slo-mo is kinda boring to watch IMO

 

[MostlySnakes]

I mean you asked for feedback. Its pretty bad dude and you have a minute of black screen. But its your first video so just watch more tutorials and get better over time.

 

[Irishcheetah]

What is that game? CS:GO or something? Likely one of the worst games to do a slow-mo video on since the graphics are pretty awful. The video is pretty long as well considering the start had the most action, perhaps make a montage of slow-mo kills and such if you want to show off slow-mo/kills. Still not bad video, better than most.

 

[BluePlays24]

MostlySnakes Agreed.

 

[axynos]

Movement is incredibly important, add movement(for example screen wiggle) / keep shots moving (even high-level films tend to do this nowadays). The entire edit being slow mo makes it boring to watch. Pacing needs to be improved definitely.

 

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Thank you all for your feedback, this was my first time using the program anyways I will use all of your advice and will try another edit tomorrow and try to improve