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Hello, I made this render today because I was bored.

Normal: Render time 13:36 (13 minutes and 36 seconds)
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Depth of Field: Render time 27:06 (27 minutes and 6 seconds)
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Rate: 1/10
 
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The broom looks like a paint brush...
 

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Hey! I think I'd give the render a solid 6/10, the Chibi rig looks very smooth but it just doesn't fit the broom, I think if you made the broom more like a Chibi style it'd be a solid render :)! I'd also like to add that if you added some more detail in the background, like other characters etc; I think you'd get a lot more attention to this render and it'd look a lot better :)!

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Hey! I think I'd give the render a solid 6/10, the Chibi rig looks very smooth but it just doesn't fit the broom, I think if you made the broom more like a Chibi style it'd be a solid render :)! I'd also like to add that if you added some more detail in the background, like other characters etc; I think you'd get a lot more attention to this render and it'd look a lot better :)!

-Thanks,
Luca.
I could of added some more characters but I was to lazy to find the skins. any ideas on how to make the broom look more chibi?

Thanks for the feedback :).
 

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I could of added some more characters but I was to lazy to find the skins. any ideas on how to make the broom look more chibi?
Probably smaller so they fit the legs and more skinny
HarryP-OnBroom-thumb.jpg
something like that
 

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Probably smaller so they fit the legs and more skinny
HarryP-OnBroom-thumb.jpg
something like that
Alright thanks, I will play around with the model and maybe make a new one.
 
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