Please Review My Site/Landing

[ThesKye]

Hi there! I'm creating a course about creating, managing, and upgrading your current server. I have made the site/landing page by myself (not a copywriter). And I would like an honest opinion and feedback on what you think about it, and how it can be improved.

To avoid things that I'm aware of, please don't write about the testimonials and about the big "the ultimate Minecraft" photo at the top (an introduction video will be there).
Many THANKS!

 

[ThesKye]

Also please give me some questions that you would ask, I want to add them to the "frequently asked questions" section.

 

[Rahul.]

Umm.. the link?

 

[Sullybash12]

Hi there! I'm creating a course about creating, managing, and upgrading your current server. I have made the site/landing page by myself (not a copywriter). And I would like an honest opinion and feedback on what you think about it, and how it can be improved.

To avoid things that I'm aware of, please don't write about the testimonials and about the big "the ultimate Minecraft" photo at the top (an introduction video will be there).
Many THANKS!

what's the link

 

[ThesKye]

LOL! Sorry guys! I forgot the most important. https://mcacademy.thinkific.com/

 

[omizZzle]

My bro, the website looks professional. I don't like the square with the image at the top, it reminds me of the 2015 videos lol. So no, good job.

Cordialy,
Félix I.

 

[pace]

LOL! Sorry guys! I forgot the most important. https://mcacademy.thinkific.com/

do you want roasts / big paragraphs pointing out everything wrong with your website, or nice compliments?

 

[ThesKye]

do you want roasts / big paragraphs pointing out everything wrong with your website, or nice compliments?

I want your honest opinion, no matter if you will roast me. Just what can be improved and your impression.[DOUBLEPOST=1610048361][/DOUBLEPOST]

My bro, the website looks professional. I don't like the square with the image at the top, it reminds me of the 2015 videos lol. So no, good job.

Cordialy,
Félix I.

Thanks! I will note that.

 

[pace]

I want your honest opinion, no matter if you will roast me. Just what can be improved and your impression.[DOUBLEPOST=1610048361][/DOUBLEPOST]
Thanks! I will note that.

ok i will try my best to have good grammar, and to be clear.

UI : The color scheme is awful, and why am i greeted with this terrible font and a centered just text logo?, random awful gradients that do not work with the color scheme used is bad, if you want to have multiple fonts, use ones that blend in. And lastly, the header wallpaper does not blend at all. PS. remove the snow.

UX: Too much reading, get to the point / summarize the text, scrolling too much add navigation if possible a sticky one, no animations = plain boring, lastly the dark yellow above titles can be hard on the eyes to read for some as it has bad contrast.

There are 3 extra faq buttons that are empty.
Use better images that are more meaningful, not some image with a cyan background and text inside it.

This is just my opinion, some may disagree and some may agree, but please do not reply to this message to say something like no this is fine. The owner of the site is free to take my opinion into heart or not.

 

[Rahul.]

Personally, I don't like it. Reminds me of people selling courses online like dropshipping or smthin

 

[ThesKye]

ok i will try my best to have good grammar, and to be clear.

UI : The color scheme is awful, and why am i greeted with this terrible font and a centered just text logo?, random awful gradients that do not work with the color scheme used is bad, if you want to have multiple fonts, use ones that blend in. And lastly, the header wallpaper does not blend at all. PS. remove the snow.

UX: Too much reading, get to the point / summarize the text, scrolling too much add navigation if possible a sticky one, no animations = plain boring, lastly the dark yellow above titles can be hard on the eyes to read for some as it has bad contrast.

There are 3 extra faq buttons that are empty.
Use better images that are more meaningful, not some image with a cyan background and text inside it.

This is just my opinion, some may disagree and some may agree, but please do not reply to this message to say something like no this is fine. The owner of the site is free to take my opinion into heart or not.

Thank you for your response![DOUBLEPOST=1610049263][/DOUBLEPOST]

Personally, I don't like it. Reminds me of people selling courses online like dropshipping or smthin

Thanks for the response!

 

[lahoussebram]

I would add more button animations. Also, the TOS and the Author could be animated. Maybe do a subtle animation as you did on the top.

 

[Webman97]

I'd simplify the homepage - there's a lot of information presented immediately and I'm not sure what to do with it.

"No" statements should be avoided on any homepage - i.e. "This Program Isn't For You If". Let your target audience decide!