Point out thing that should be fixed please

[rome.]

Started working on this, can you guys point me out some fixes? Gotta make it perfect

 

[rome.]

why does it say template text if you created it? Either way not trying to trash if it is your maybe change the font at the top and add more elements

Wait where does it say template text? I grabbed the background as a stock from internet but thats it

 

[Shaun]

The contrast needs to be amped up a bit - I'd recommend adding an overlay to the background image to make it darker.

If your going to right-align a navbar, you'll want to add something to the left-align to balance it out.

You should play around just a bit with font-weights and letter-spacing to give your text more emphasis.