Rate my drawing

[TheGGAccount]

I am a new graphic designer and I just made this in around 3 hours, please rate it I will take harsh comments but posting stuff like it's shit doesn't help =D

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[DarkDesigner]

Looks good man, gg

 

[KirbyDogs]

I would honestly give it a 5/10. The lineart seems a bit rugged and sloppy in some areas and the proportions of the body are a little off. I like the shading and textures. Best of luck with your art!

 

[TheGGAccount]

Looks good man, gg

Thanks, I updated hair a little bit now, hope you see difference [DOUBLEPOST=1465409332][/DOUBLEPOST]

I would honestly give it a 5/10. The lineart seems a bit rugged and sloppy in some areas and the proportions of the body are a little off. I like the shading and textures. Best of luck with your art!

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Thanks for the feedback! Lineart is right now not my strongest point but textures and shading is slowly getting better. I kind of messed up on the linart by making all lines connected and by accident rubbing out a few things and then forgetting to CTRL + Z it but yeah, I will improve on it I also updated a bit of the hair.

 

[TheGGAccount]

Looks really good! 7/10

Thanks!!!!

I would give it a 6/10

Thank you

 

[ItzOrg]

5.5/10

 

[TheGGAccount]

5.5/10

Thanks, what can I improve on?

 

[ItzOrg]

Thanks, what can I improve on?

Looks a bit rugged on the lines. The hands are kinda not correct. Other than that it's pretty sexy.

 

[TheGGAccount]

Looks a bit rugged on the lines. The hands are kinda not correct. Other than that it's pretty sexy.

Ye as I said in a post above, lineart is not my strongest point

 

[TheGGAccount]

6/10. Lineart is a bit messed up but looks nice. GL!

Yup, I hate the photoshop undos cos you cant undo it fully and then you try redo for example, fill and then the lines keep getting smaller and smaller so RIP[DOUBLEPOST=1465410613][/DOUBLEPOST]Should I have keep the line in the hair showing the like blocky head or nah??!?

 

[Jonny]

I am a new graphic designer and I just made this in around 3 hours, please rate it I will take harsh comments but posting stuff like it's shit doesn't help =D

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6/10 The very best of luck with your art!

 

[TheGGAccount]

6/10 The very best of luck with your art!

Thank you!!! Also quick questions, do you think the line in the hair fits, or not?

 

[Jonny]

Thank you!!! Also quick questions, do you think the line in the hair fits, or not?

Front looks fine with good definition, the back looks a bit scruffy.

 

[TheGGAccount]

Front looks fine with good definition, the back looks a bit scruffy.

Ye I just did tons of scribbles and the front just started looking dope for some reason when I finished!t

Looks dope!

Thanks, I am 2dope4u lol

 

[YourPanda]

Work on your line art, but in all it isn't bad! 6.5/10