Rate my first mc drawing!

[Depression]

here is my second try, i tried shading and it looks meh, excuse the line art i did this early in the morning!!

Still looks like he's jerking off. You really do seem to have potential though so after some practice you should open a shop on here I would buy something

 

[Alexander M]

Still looks like he's jerking off. You really do seem to have potential though so after some practice you should open a shop on here I would buy something

Thanks!

 

[TechBanana]

Looks pretty good for a beginner!
Would suggest working on linework, parts of it are a tad sloppy.
Shading looks great

 

[Alexander M]

Looks pretty good for a beginner!
Would suggest working on linework, parts of it are a tad sloppy.
Shading looks great

Thanks, wait until you see the one I do tonight!![DOUBLEPOST=1443486972,1443470569][/DOUBLEPOST]ok guys here is my THIRD attempt at a mc drawing! ik the shading on the fade is a little weird but i think i did a lot better compared to my old ones!

 

[Boy]

noice m90 8.5/10

 

[Alexander M]

noice m90 8.5/10

really? thanks hopefully i get better, this was more a test of shading!

 

[Alexander M]

It's aight. Better than I can do anyway. Here's my recreation:

teach me ur shading method?

 

[Alexander M]

Its a secret I will not share. Is it good for a first time?

thats ur first time? holy shit dude we should collab sometime

 

[Depression]

Number 3 looks epic!

 

[Alexander M]

Number3 like epic!

Thanks

 

[Alexander M]

Here is the sketch I started this morning, any suggestions b4 i start line art?

 

[Depression]

Here is the sketch I started this morning, any suggestions b4 i start line art?

Right arm looks a bit short imo idk tho.

 

[Alexander M]

Right arm looks a bit short imo idk tho.

I'll make it longer.

 

[thebaum64]

Here is the sketch I started this morning, any suggestions b4 i start line art?

Arms need to be thinker and longer.. But.. You have improved so much...

 

[Alexander M]

Arms need to be thinker and longer.. But.. You have improved so much...

I'll try to make the arms better in my next drawing i already started line art on this one and ty so much[DOUBLEPOST=1443571423,1443566081][/DOUBLEPOST]My fourth attempt!
What do you think?