Rate my first trailer?

[ImSorryGoodBye]

Hey Can you have a look at my trailer i whipped up and tell me what you think about it...

Disclaimer... I am aware of the FPS flickering near the end and can easily be fixed and the small spelling mistake.




Thanks

 

[ImSorryGoodBye]

Jad I know your pretty good with trailers Jad can you give me a few pointers?

 

[UberStudios]

Good start!
Looks a bit plain I would recommend using a color correction and put more work into editing so it looks more professional.
Almost 3 minutes is a bit long and drawn out and the choice of music is not a good way to draw in the viewer, I would recommend a more upbeat song.

 

[Cal]

Pretty good, try to add some more cinematic angles and buff up your lense flares just a tad.

 

[ImSorryGoodBye]

Pretty good, try to add some more cinematic angles and buff up your lense flares just a tad.

Believe it or now... I just used Kuda shaders OBS and Sony vegas to edit and render didnt go into all that good stuff but i will soon get there one day..
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Good start!
Looks a bit plain I would recommend using a color correct and put more work into editing so it looks more professional.
Almost 3 minutes is a bit long and drawn out and the choice of music is not a good way to draw in the viewer, I would recommend a more upbeat song.

Thanks i will give an upbeat song a try! Thanks for your opinion.

 

[Jad]

Try and make it more of an edit. It's too long and boring. Speed things up a bit; make it more interesting. What I would do is: Get more interesting and quick cinematics and try to incorporate the music, put FOV in-game down a lot, add a colour correction and add RSMB. Make it feel more like a trailer. Also, just a side-note: try to make something unique, the style of trailer that you made had been done already, change it up a bit, make your own style

 

[ImSorryGoodBye]

Try and make it more of an edit. It's too long and boring. Speed things up a bit; make it more interesting. What I would do is: Get more interesting and quick cinematics and try to incorporate the music, put FOV in-game down a lot, add a colour correction and add RSMB. Make it feel more like a trailer. Also, just a side-note: try to make something unique, the style of trailer that you made had been done already, change it up a bit, make your own style

What is it that you record with? I'm also getting a lot of hate because of the chunks not loading quick enough... My Render distance is on extream.
One more thing... Can you PM me with all the programs you use in game and on ur desktop!

Thanks so much for the feedback Jad !