Rate my logos

[Grace.]

I just got a drawing tablet today, and I've been trying it out a bit and I'm really liking it. I'm wondering what you guys think of my first work with it? ( I forgot the H, but hey it's practice )


NEW LOGO ( made for AzDogOG )

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NEW & IMPROVED VERSION ( version 2 )

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first version

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[Sawyer.]

Im no expert but I think it looks nice. Seems a little basic though but just my opinion

 

[Grace.]

Im no expert but I think it looks nice. Seems a little basic though but just my opinion

Yeah it's pretty basic , thought I would start with something basic at first

 

[Azdog]

Yeah it's pretty basic , thought I would start with something basic at first

What tablet?

 

[blonde]

This was my first logo I made when I get my drawing tablet, and my latest. Although, I basically copied a logo, not being original/creative.

 

[ZDesigns]

To be honest, it looks like a super rough draft. The concept is nice, but try to add more detail, shading, and refining your linework. Keep practicing!

 

[bran]

Not sure if it's just me but I actually really really like the sun.

 

[Grace.]

What tablet?

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Not sure if it's just me but I actually really really like the sun.

The sun turned out the best in my opinion too

 

[Sparko]

Not sure if it's just me but I actually really really like the sun.

sameee, I think it could be on a graphic tee tbh

 

[Grace.]

sameee, I think it could be on a graphic tee tbh

I think it's good but work on the text

Not sure if it's just me but I actually really really like the sun.

Im no expert but I think it looks nice. Seems a little basic though but just my opinion

I've re worked it completly and made a new version. It's added it to the post, if you could tell me what you think of that that'd be great

 

[Sparko]

Looks a lot better than the first one, it's not really a typical style for a server logo (it looks flat) but I personally like it

 

[Grace.]

I'm really bummed you removed the cool sun I think it looks better but it still needs shading and the new version just feels so clustered. You have so many things in it at once. Look at popular logos, they typically have like 2 or 3 things relating to the server. Yours has waaay more, I feel kind of confused even looking at it. Try making it short and simple - maybe a beach with some chairs and bring the cool sun back. If you feel you can shade it, add some people on the chairs and make the ip the water

That's a pretty good suggestion, thank you I'll try to spread stuff out and de-cluster it more on my next work.

Looks a lot better than the first one, it's not really a typical style for a server logo (it looks flat) but I personally like it

Thank you , by " it's not really a typical style for a server logo (it looks flat) " , do you mean that most of the other server logos are a bit more 3 dymensional?

 

[Sparko]

That's a pretty good suggestion, thank you I'll try to spread stuff out and de-cluster it more on my next work.

Thank you , by " it's not really a typical style for a server logo (it looks flat) " , do you mean that most of the other server logos are a bit more 3 dymensional?

yeah exactly that

 

[Aelin]

It looks pretty good! One thing I would recommend is turning off pressure sensitivity to prevent some of your lines from looking like a rough draft. Sometimes, having pressure sensitivity (lines getting thinner the lighter you push) gives an awesome effect, but sometimes it's better to keep all lines the exact same width, which is usually what I see artists do in lettering specifically.

It would make your words look much more crisp I think, and help random points from being more bold than others (like the bottom of the E vs the thin lines at the top of it).

 

[Grace.]

It looks pretty good! One thing I would recommend is turning off pressure sensitivity to prevent some of your lines from looking like a rough draft. Sometimes, having pressure sensitivity (lines getting thinner the lighter you push) gives an awesome effect, but sometimes it's better to keep all lines the exact same width, which is usually what I see artists do in lettering specifically.

It would make your words look much more crisp I think, and help random points from being more bold than others (like the bottom of the E vs the thin lines at the top of it).

I'll try that on my next work