Rate My Storyline (serious)

[ThePhantomDev]

https://crimsonstorm.fandom.com/wiki/Summary

This is just a quick summary if the first saga of my series, assuming that my manga one shot is accepted. Be gentle , I want to improve on this series , not be insulted .Thanks.

 

[Vanish]

It's alright .I've seen better , if I'm going , to be honest.But it's alright.

 

[ThePhantomDev]

It's alright .I've seen better , if I'm going , to be honest.But it's alright.

Yea it's just alittle summary , alittle more detail will be put in in the more official documents

 

[ThePhantomDev]

Good job

Thanks bro .Hope we can make peace