ROAST MY SERVER

[Lerfing]

IP: outerrealm.us.to
Version: 1.12.2 - 1.16.1
Discord: https://discord.gg/Hb89aFE

Praise or talk shit, idc
I'll use it as constructive criticism to make it better

 

[Ethan O.]

Don't know if I can roast that. Looks great! Best of luck to you! :tup:

 

[Niccckk]

Cool looking server!

 

[smilee]

looks like a piece of awesomeness

 

[InternetThing]

IP: outerrealm.us.to
Version: 1.12.2 - 1.16.1
Discord: https://discord.gg/Hb89aFE

Praise or talk shit, idc
I'll use it as constructive criticism to make it better

nice server!

 

[UNIRACKS]

Nice work dude, dope server!

 

[Pretium]

I'll take a stab at it. In the first 10 seconds of the trailer, you lost my attention. The plain white text made my brain think that it wasn't going to be interesting. First impressions are everything. The purpose of a trailer is to get your attention, and leave you with wanting to know more about the server. Everyone on MCM is positive and we're willing to give your time to look at your server. However, when you're advertising people aren't gonna care. You have to make them care. So, personally, I would change the style of the trailer.

I would add a scoreboard on the side for stats like leveling, xp, class, etc... if you haven't done that. It looks a little plain imo.

Hope this helped,
Cheers