Second Cs:Go edit feedback

[Ilay A]

NOTE : I MESSED UP THE COLOR CORRECTION

Give me feedback on stuff other than the terrible color work

My first time editing sounds into a silent cinematic footage

 

[Jami]

Its sick! But a bit short

 

[Franix]

Looks cool except the colors Keep it going

 

[Orochimaru]

Nice vid; want dem skins tho; I need a good AWP skin. Using a safari mesh currently

 

[Ilay A]

has no meaning to the edit at all

Well, I partly agree, in a viewer's perspective, I think I messed up, but in the raw footage, you can see the guy going through this tunnel towards B site, because of the glow and shake, you can easily miss that fact he went through the tiny tunnel, will make sure to keep that in mind next time.

At the end of m4 shots it just feels like dead time

What do you mean dead time? like useless/unnecessary ? Like I'm trying to make it as if the guy is retreating towards A site, garbs the knife and runs back. any idea how can I make it flow better? I struggled with this clip very much, the hardest part in the entire edit in my opinion

 

[Ilay A]

these are public cinematic clips smart one, from pro players that blow money on skins

Clever boy, people use demos they downloaded online and use the desired shots/parts oWo

 

[Ilay A]

btw the S_Glow is way too quick, i’d suggest syncing it a few beats off and make sure you use line graph PLEASE

Sorry for the silly question, what do you mean by line graph?

 

[Ilay A]

https://gyazo.com/2a40d67602a25d08ce7d4c6061d5db84

Yeah, I know what a line graph is, but what do you want me to do with it?

 

[Orochimaru]

these are public cinematic clips smart one, from pro players that blow money on skins

and how should I know they are from pro players? I don't care nor watch them?

 

[Justify]

Sick edit, but i wish it would've been longer

 

[Vanish]

Decent, but short.
Spends more time on a black screen than an actual edit though.