Server Trailer Feedback?

[ErrCode19]

Just want you're guys opinions on my new server trailer, its my first one, whatcha think?

 

[Jad]

I think you should stay a developer

 

[Irishcheetah]

Personally i dislike the music and the orange screen effect going on. Also not sure about the text "B MINE" and so on as it's always staying on screen, a pop up would be better i feel, or at least move the text to the bottom of the screen. You are also typing commands on the video, would be better if you edited snaps to different screens in my opinion. Lastly, 30 seconds is good for a trailer. But not a bad video for first time, i have seen worse.

 

[khromma]

extremely colorful.

and font doesn't match.

otherwise, i guess not too bad for a first video at all.

 

[ErrCode19]

tThanks guyss for the feedback! What should i use no filters at all? What kind of text

 

[khromma]

tThanks guyss for the feedback! What should i use no filters at all? What kind of text

solid text. without the holes in the middle. and white text. use less effects, and keep them limited to 1-2 colors. black would be much better. maybe black and orange to fit the Halloween spirit. just my opinion.

watch a few trailers online. high quality, professional ones.

 

[ErrCode19]

lol my virgin eyes

xD