Server Trailer [for like the 8th time lol]

[moon10k]

Sorry for posting this a lot, I'm just looking for feedback to improve my trailers. Please rate this (1-10) and provide some constructive criticism if you can! Thanks!

Made this while I was sick, and made it in around 3 hours lol. Honestly I'd still say it's my best, the CC isn't dog shit this time, and shaders are actually pretty nice.



**NOTE** I had very little to work with video wise. There wasn't anything I could show off on the server so that's why the trailer may look bland.

 

[Blood]

I like the music

 

[moon10k]

it's nothing against you but I stopped watching after about 10 seconds when I realized the music wasn't good

Just the music chosen by the client.[DOUBLEPOST=1546226390][/DOUBLEPOST]

I like the music

Uhm, thanks?

 

[moon10k]

The trailer is pretty good, No offense or anything but the song is terrible. The quality is pretty good. I would add some more detail into your trailer, what I mean by detail is to make them different from others. If you know what I mean.

The client ordered a 45s Package, so I just tried to shove some clips in there lol. But I understand, I'll take that into consideration in my next trailer!

 

[Aekalix]

Hmm.

* The flickering does not bother me on this one, maybe you changed it or it fits this trailer better.
* An outro of 17 seconds seems a bit long.
* The lens flare looks like it switches position. It starts in front of the logo then switched to the back of the logo.
* Same lens flares as the previous video and outro. While this could be you developing a style, some variation is needed.
* Sync to the music is fine. I, once again, like the intro transition.
* The music itself is fine too. Not all of the songs used have to be hype songs or build tension. IMO the song works fine with the trailer. If it's not your taste (it isn't mine either) then just get over it.
* Font fits the style of the trailer and the pace of the music.

The text is hard to read, it's a nice shot though.

While I do like this shot for some reason as it breaks up the continuous showing of the builds it does not show anything of the server really beside the clouds which do look good. (shaderpacks, yey!)

Oops? A sort of the same mistake the shot afterwards. The complete stop in the shot afterwards feels a bit odd and I cannot decide if I like it or dislike it.

* I do like how you did not put a lens flare over the logo in the outro.
* The dividing lens flare colours nicely to the logo.
* The lights give a good ambient for the intro and outro.

Not sure what is up there with the final letters. And here:

The trailer is fine. It does not do anything wrong really but then again it does not do much great either (creativity etc.). It now feels like these kinds of shots, animations and these kinds of trailers, in general, have become your comfort zone. Time to step out of it again.

Edit: Clarified some things so I did not look rude

 

[moon10k]

Hmm.

* The flickering does not bother me on this one, maybe you changed it or it fits this trailer better.
* An outro of 17 seconds seems a bit long.
* The lens flare looks like it switches position. It starts in front of the logo then switched to the back of the logo.
* Same lens flares as the previous video and outro. While this could be you developing a style, some variation is needed.
* Sync to the music is fine. I, once again, like the intro transition.
* The music itself is fine too. Not all of the songs used have to be hype songs or build tension. IMO the song works fine with the trailer. If it's not your taste (it isn't mine either) then just get over it.
* Font fits the style of the trailer and the pace of the music.

The text is hard to read, it's a nice shot though.

While I do like this shot for some reason as it breaks up the continuous showing of the builds it does not show anything of the server really beside the clouds which do look good. (shaderpacks, yey!)

Oops? A sort of the same mistake the shot afterwards. The complete stop in the shot afterwards feels a bit odd and I cannot decide if I like it or dislike it.

* I do like how you did not put a lens flare over the logo in the outro.
* The dividing lens flare colours nicely to the logo.
* The lights give a good ambient for the intro and outro.

Not sure what is up there with the final letters. And here:

The trailer is fine. It does not do anything wrong really but then again it does not do much great either. It now feels like these kinds of shots, animations and these kinds of trailers, in general, have become your comfort zone. Time to step out of it again.

Would if could. I have some new ideas for my next trailer. I had legit nothing to work with server wise. There was nothing I could show off lol. Just the lobby, a spawn, a warp, and a cannon. But, my next client actually has things for me to show off, so that's something. Idk what happened at the end with the text tbh. Like always, Appreciate the feedback.!

 

[Aekalix]

Would if could. I have some new ideas for my next trailer. I had legit nothing to work with server wise. There was nothing I could show off lol. Just the lobby, a spawn, a warp, and a cannon. But, my next client actually has things for me to show off, so that's something. Like always, Appreciate the feedback.!

Yes, it's not your fault or maybe a bit. I don't know. But just try to do something different everytime you make a new trailer. Looking forward to the next one.

 

[moon10k]

Yes, it's not your fault or maybe a bit. I don't know. But just try to do something different everytime you make a new trailer. Looking forward to the next one.

Yep! I have a bit of new ideas in mind, and now that I actually have something I can work with, hopefully it'll turn out a lot better.

 

[moon10k]

Only 2 things I personally found wrong with this trailer.

• 1. Very off Sync, I personally believe that’s a main part of a server trailer is when the music syncs perfectly with the text animations and pumps or transitions. Overall not bad but still could use some work.
• 2. The outro screen is very basic and I feel it would add more uniqueness to you’re trailers if you were to add a more eye catching outro.

Still would recommend purchasing from moon10k due to how quick he can get quality trailers done & pricing is very affordable.

Overall Rate - 8.5/10

Thanks for the feedback, Appreciate it. For the sync, yes it was a bit off, I'll take responsibility for that. For the outro, it doesn't really matter imo. The outro has a decent style to it, and I think it's fine. It's not a super big part of the trailer.

 

[moon10k]

The outro may not seem like a big part but it really is, everyone sees it, even if you think they don’t. I have lots of experience with server owning and outro’s for trailers are one of the biggest parts due to the fact it shows the server ip, release date & all the important information. Making that look nice & professional catches people’s eyes and especially on Minecraft that’s a huge thing, might sound funny to you but it’s really helpful to have a professional eye catching outro.

Ah alright. Any tips on how I can make it better?

 

[XMario]

8.7/10
1st and 3rd clip slowed down too much and I'm not the biggest fan of that shake blur you put on clips(I would say it doesn't look the best, but again thats probably because i personaly don't like it).
You can easily sell these trailers man.

 

[moon10k]

8.7/10
1st and 3rd clip slowed down too much and I'm not the biggest fan of that shake blur you put on clips(I would say it doesn't look the best, but again thats probably because i personaly don't like it).
You can easily sell these trailers man.

Thanks! I actually do sell em