Staff Application

[TEEJAY1807]

IGN: TEEJAY1807
Age:13.
Why I would like to be a staff member : I feel that I've been in these community long enough to understand the aspects of staffing, I feel that I could be beneficial to your server and if you were to give me a chance I would not put you down, I'll exceed expectations.
My contact information: Discord - TEEJAY1807#1156
If you are interested with my staffing service contact me on Discord and give me some details about your network and maybe I might just start moderating it.

 

[Cheez]

Very good grammar. Very good reasons. A lot of experience. Should hire! VOUCH!

Yas good grammar much vouch

 

[Zyaf]

hEllo eye wuld liek tu recruyt yu fer my miencreft sErver




































This is a joke, chill the hell out.

 

[KnightDoesntCare]

yas is very goodd you very smart i no speak english very gud

 

[jxhdvn]

You should focus on spelling + grammar & show the past experiences you've had staffing, & put lots of detail into it! Good luck with getting staff on servers though

 

[TEEJAY1807]

I'm not going to repeat what was said above, I'm going to point out different issues with this thread.

An application is regularly 5,000-7,500 characters (a decent one.) And your application barely peaks 330 characters. And for your "bad English" there are many applications that help you improve your grammar or addons to Google (I do not suggest using them if you want people to actually believe that you are a skilled writer.)

Rewording, I highly suggest going through this thread and reword the majority of it because it looks quite all over the place and extremely unorganized.
Here is an example of me rewording it + fixing additional issues.

Your "application."
"IGN: TEEJAY1807
Age:13
Why I wanna be A staff Member : I am A good player and
I wanna Help on HCF Server's that are beginning or need Staff.
I am interested in a lot.
Contact: Discord - TEEJAY1807#1156
If U r interested in Me Msg Me on Discord Good Luck With finding Staff if i am not the one
U need on your Minecraft server."

My modified version of your "application."

"IGN: TEEJAY1807
Age:13.
Why I would like to be a staff member : I feel that I've been in these community long enough to understand the aspects of staffing, I feel that I could be beneficial to your server and if you were to give me a chance I would not put you down, I'll exceed expectations.
My contact information: Discord - TEEJAY1807#1156
If you are interested with my staffing service contact me on Discord and give me some details about your network and maybe I might just start moderating it."

I'm just saying there is a lot you should work on. (Again I understand that English may not be your first language but you can use programs that will help you.

Thank's for your reply.
Is it okay If i use this for my apply?