Hey, all I Am going to give you all a sneak peak at my new book that I have been writing. I would like some reviews and comments on it. Also I might sell something like a subscription to my work for 3$ or something tell me what you think.
Book Name: Super K
Description: When a boy's life gets flipped and turned around from a car accident. He meets a boy who likes him but he doesn't want to go through the pain again. The government makes him a superhuman robot what will he do? the government needs him and keeps forcing him to do things he does not want to do.
This has LGBT themes in it so if you don't like it please don't read then comment on how bad it is. ALSO. EVERYTHING IS COPYRIGHTED
Prolog:
I run down the alley and trip, a pot hole … Why did I have to trip, I have to get going
I force myself up and keep running. I high jump over a wall and land into the alley across from it. I start running then get tackled to the ground. Falling to the ground I kick and fight the person off of me. I don’t even see who it is. I get up and about to run off but I feel hands grab my ankles. I turn around and point my hand at the person. He's wearing white, and looks up and smiles and then I feel pain in my head. He pulls at my ankles making me fall and blackout.
Chapter One:
Three months earlier.
“No, we're not going to Starbucks.” I hate Starbucks. I cross my arms and look over to my boyfriend Jack.
“Stop it you're going to make me cry, You're too cute.” He is so cute. I mean if he got hurt or died I would go with him. I laugh and uncross my arms.
“We're going to somewhere other than that place.” I say as I grab his hand on the steering wheel. I look out the window. We have been trying to decide where we're going to eat at and go work on out Algebra two homework.
“Fine.” he sighs and leans over and kisses me. I kiss back then pull away.
“Where we going?” I’m wondering if he’s going to tell me.
“Somewhere special.” I sigh and cross my arms and pout again. He laughs and starts the car.
“Come on you'll see.” He pulls out of my dad’s driveway and starts to drive the car towards to a “fancy” place. I uncross my arms and look out the window and lay my head on my seat belt.
I start to relax from everything that has been going on. Jack and I have been going out for about a month and we haven't even told our parents yet. My dad knows I'm gay and like him but I’m too scared to tell him. He doesn't really like Jack. His parents don’t even know he's gay. They are one of those parents that if they knew he was gay probably would kick him out. They are very religious. We have been hiding our sexuality from the school and everyone. Jack is a soccer player and is well known.
He is so hot. He has light brown hair combed up and grayish blue eyes. He also has round cheekbones and pearly white teeth. His smile makes people’s days and he wears button down shirts He wears athletic shorts and running shoes. They are always either blue or green or neon colors. I, on the other hand, I am a mess.
I like gray and green and blue. I wear a hoodie that is too big for me and jeans and orange shoes. I have blond hair always comes back to not get in my face. I’m a very outgoing person. I am caring and if you cry I will cry. I live with my dad. We live in Los Angeles California and it is always nice and sunny. My dad and I live in a two bedroom one bath apartment. I love the beach and so does Jack. My dad works at a grocery store as the manager and he makes enough money for me and him to sustain a living. My mom and Dad got divorced when I was one year old. My mom took me to Pennsylvania and I lived there for six years Then I would visit every summer to see my grandma and my dad. Then my dad won custody of me when I was nine I flew out there that next summer. I don't really remember it that well but basically, my dad took ok care of me. He still was drinking at the time. I would wake up to him asking stupid questions or cooking. Then he was really drunk one night and I called my aunts and uncles. I lived with them for six years. My aunt was great and cared for me. My uncle got me into boy scouts and I am still working on it I am very close, though.
“Hey, we're here.” I feel a tap on my shoulder and look over at Jack. I stretch then yawn. I look at where we are… WOW. There are cars in front of us then I see the golden arches.
“Why are we at the drive in at McDonald's? You said it was going to be nice.” I glare at him.
“Well it's nicer than eating at my place or yours and we get to do whatever we want. Except for maybe have sex but.” I hit him in the arm.
“Really? What was that for?” He asks I just glare at him and then start laughing.
“Your face was priceless.” I keep on laughing and he rolls his eyes and drives forward.
“What do you want?”
“Anything that you get will be fine.” I never liked picking things. He orders two number ones and two Mc flurries. I lean over and hug his waist. He kisses my head. I hear a honk and sit up then look behind me.
“Ow my fucking god.” No No No No It can't be.
“What?” Jack turns his head and he goes pale white. In the car behind us is a group of girls from our school their cheerleaders. They look really surprised and pissed one of them get out of the car and starts walking to the driver side of the car.
I scout away from him and watch her come to the side of the car. She gets to the door and leans onto it.
“Soooo. Jack, right?” She asks pursing her lips. OMG I’m going to die
“Yaaaa?”
“Who's your boyfriend?” She asks. God please no
“We're not dating, and the names Kevin.” I blurt out.
“Oh, really you’re not dating well you two sure look gay as fuck.”
“F-off so what if we're gay.”
“Oh so we have some faggots in the car.” she sneers and gives us some dirty looks.
“And it looks like we have a stupid ass homophobe here so f off before I hit you with a car.”
says Jack yay he's standing up for me. I'm glad he is or I would have been hopeless.
“No you're the ones going to get hit with a car.” she walks away with those words and I start to cry. I curl up into a ball and I feel the car start to move. Why do people have to be so fucking rude? I mean I love him and he loves me just leave it at that but no they must go off on us.
“Hey it's ok, let’s just go home I lost my appetite” He puts a hand on my leg and I start to calm down. We stop at a red light. He leans over and pulls at my arm I look at him and he smiles. I lean over to him and kiss him. There's a honk at the back of the car and I freak out then look back and it's not the cheerleaders. I see they were telling us to go. We start to move and I moved back so I can face forward into the seat but as I’m doing this I see the cheerleader’s car coming straight at us from the driver side of the car. There going like 50-60 MPH.
“JACK!!!!” That's when we get hit. I get thrown into Jack and he gets thrown into me I see blood then I black out.
I can feel that I'm awake but I can’t open my eyes. I here laughing. I force my eyes open. Holy shit. I can't see my legs and I can barely breathe. My whole body hurts. I see that my legs are compressed in between the dashboard and the seat. There is metal coming out of everywhere. We I’m dizzy and everything is blurry. I turn my head and see that jack is laying on my and he has a huge cut on his hand and his legs are nowhere to be seen the door of the car is squashed up against him.
“I hope both of you are dead.” I kind of see pink and purple but then the car that his us moves and then I hear scratching and the car goes away. I look back down at Jack
“Jack? Jack? JACK?” I can't feel my arm and he isn't responding. Then I look down and I see that there is a piece of metal through his chest and it is through my leg two.
“NO NO NO NO NO NO.” I start to cry but can't. I hear sirens and then I get dizzy and black out again.
If you liked it comment and tell me if you want to subscribe to me for each chapter as they come out.
Book Name: Super K
Description: When a boy's life gets flipped and turned around from a car accident. He meets a boy who likes him but he doesn't want to go through the pain again. The government makes him a superhuman robot what will he do? the government needs him and keeps forcing him to do things he does not want to do.
This has LGBT themes in it so if you don't like it please don't read then comment on how bad it is. ALSO. EVERYTHING IS COPYRIGHTED
Prolog:
I run down the alley and trip, a pot hole … Why did I have to trip, I have to get going
I force myself up and keep running. I high jump over a wall and land into the alley across from it. I start running then get tackled to the ground. Falling to the ground I kick and fight the person off of me. I don’t even see who it is. I get up and about to run off but I feel hands grab my ankles. I turn around and point my hand at the person. He's wearing white, and looks up and smiles and then I feel pain in my head. He pulls at my ankles making me fall and blackout.
Chapter One:
Three months earlier.
“No, we're not going to Starbucks.” I hate Starbucks. I cross my arms and look over to my boyfriend Jack.
“Stop it you're going to make me cry, You're too cute.” He is so cute. I mean if he got hurt or died I would go with him. I laugh and uncross my arms.
“We're going to somewhere other than that place.” I say as I grab his hand on the steering wheel. I look out the window. We have been trying to decide where we're going to eat at and go work on out Algebra two homework.
“Fine.” he sighs and leans over and kisses me. I kiss back then pull away.
“Where we going?” I’m wondering if he’s going to tell me.
“Somewhere special.” I sigh and cross my arms and pout again. He laughs and starts the car.
“Come on you'll see.” He pulls out of my dad’s driveway and starts to drive the car towards to a “fancy” place. I uncross my arms and look out the window and lay my head on my seat belt.
I start to relax from everything that has been going on. Jack and I have been going out for about a month and we haven't even told our parents yet. My dad knows I'm gay and like him but I’m too scared to tell him. He doesn't really like Jack. His parents don’t even know he's gay. They are one of those parents that if they knew he was gay probably would kick him out. They are very religious. We have been hiding our sexuality from the school and everyone. Jack is a soccer player and is well known.
He is so hot. He has light brown hair combed up and grayish blue eyes. He also has round cheekbones and pearly white teeth. His smile makes people’s days and he wears button down shirts He wears athletic shorts and running shoes. They are always either blue or green or neon colors. I, on the other hand, I am a mess.
I like gray and green and blue. I wear a hoodie that is too big for me and jeans and orange shoes. I have blond hair always comes back to not get in my face. I’m a very outgoing person. I am caring and if you cry I will cry. I live with my dad. We live in Los Angeles California and it is always nice and sunny. My dad and I live in a two bedroom one bath apartment. I love the beach and so does Jack. My dad works at a grocery store as the manager and he makes enough money for me and him to sustain a living. My mom and Dad got divorced when I was one year old. My mom took me to Pennsylvania and I lived there for six years Then I would visit every summer to see my grandma and my dad. Then my dad won custody of me when I was nine I flew out there that next summer. I don't really remember it that well but basically, my dad took ok care of me. He still was drinking at the time. I would wake up to him asking stupid questions or cooking. Then he was really drunk one night and I called my aunts and uncles. I lived with them for six years. My aunt was great and cared for me. My uncle got me into boy scouts and I am still working on it I am very close, though.
“Hey, we're here.” I feel a tap on my shoulder and look over at Jack. I stretch then yawn. I look at where we are… WOW. There are cars in front of us then I see the golden arches.
“Why are we at the drive in at McDonald's? You said it was going to be nice.” I glare at him.
“Well it's nicer than eating at my place or yours and we get to do whatever we want. Except for maybe have sex but.” I hit him in the arm.
“Really? What was that for?” He asks I just glare at him and then start laughing.
“Your face was priceless.” I keep on laughing and he rolls his eyes and drives forward.
“What do you want?”
“Anything that you get will be fine.” I never liked picking things. He orders two number ones and two Mc flurries. I lean over and hug his waist. He kisses my head. I hear a honk and sit up then look behind me.
“Ow my fucking god.” No No No No It can't be.
“What?” Jack turns his head and he goes pale white. In the car behind us is a group of girls from our school their cheerleaders. They look really surprised and pissed one of them get out of the car and starts walking to the driver side of the car.
I scout away from him and watch her come to the side of the car. She gets to the door and leans onto it.
“Soooo. Jack, right?” She asks pursing her lips. OMG I’m going to die
“Yaaaa?”
“Who's your boyfriend?” She asks. God please no
“We're not dating, and the names Kevin.” I blurt out.
“Oh, really you’re not dating well you two sure look gay as fuck.”
“F-off so what if we're gay.”
“Oh so we have some faggots in the car.” she sneers and gives us some dirty looks.
“And it looks like we have a stupid ass homophobe here so f off before I hit you with a car.”
says Jack yay he's standing up for me. I'm glad he is or I would have been hopeless.
“No you're the ones going to get hit with a car.” she walks away with those words and I start to cry. I curl up into a ball and I feel the car start to move. Why do people have to be so fucking rude? I mean I love him and he loves me just leave it at that but no they must go off on us.
“Hey it's ok, let’s just go home I lost my appetite” He puts a hand on my leg and I start to calm down. We stop at a red light. He leans over and pulls at my arm I look at him and he smiles. I lean over to him and kiss him. There's a honk at the back of the car and I freak out then look back and it's not the cheerleaders. I see they were telling us to go. We start to move and I moved back so I can face forward into the seat but as I’m doing this I see the cheerleader’s car coming straight at us from the driver side of the car. There going like 50-60 MPH.
“JACK!!!!” That's when we get hit. I get thrown into Jack and he gets thrown into me I see blood then I black out.
I can feel that I'm awake but I can’t open my eyes. I here laughing. I force my eyes open. Holy shit. I can't see my legs and I can barely breathe. My whole body hurts. I see that my legs are compressed in between the dashboard and the seat. There is metal coming out of everywhere. We I’m dizzy and everything is blurry. I turn my head and see that jack is laying on my and he has a huge cut on his hand and his legs are nowhere to be seen the door of the car is squashed up against him.
“I hope both of you are dead.” I kind of see pink and purple but then the car that his us moves and then I hear scratching and the car goes away. I look back down at Jack
“Jack? Jack? JACK?” I can't feel my arm and he isn't responding. Then I look down and I see that there is a piece of metal through his chest and it is through my leg two.
“NO NO NO NO NO NO.” I start to cry but can't. I hear sirens and then I get dizzy and black out again.
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