The First Server Trailer I Have Ever Made! Opinions?

[ItsNass]

Here is the first trailer i have ever made, this is for my own server. The reason i decided to make my own is because other people didn't really offer what i needed for my price range.
It only took me a few hours to make and it is the first i have ever made.

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!



Ps, I'm not trying to advertise here at all, but if you actually are interested in my fully custom skyblock server, read the description in the video! You can even win a free rank, or crate keys if you re-upload the video. Thanks.

 

[Zooply]

Looks really great!

 

[Primal Power]

I love the shameless plug xD. But getting back to business, I recommend you get something like PixelCam so it makes the camera shot a lot more smoother so people know you didn't just fly around in creative.

 

[nick]

Very good for your first trailer, for your others maybe do better movements and maybe the text can move? Not sure but It's still nice

 

[ItsNass]

UPDATE: thank all of you so much for the feedback. Ill make sure to use pixelcam next time

 

[SMKM]

Looks pretty good, considering it's your first. But I don't like the text and music. The camera movement could be a little bit smoother as well